That Burning Sensation
Wouldnt post this if i didnt feel bad about waiting so long to get it out but its something i will post the final version when i post the next chapter this chapter will be revised and expanded
Contest Entry: Tron Skates (Gluepaw)
He even went out of his way to help carlson revise his blueprints to correspond with the updated shoe, along with pointing out specific areas that would allow augmentation - stating that a device placed anywhere else would cause severe discomfort or the automation
Don't Need to Be Afraid
The story you see here is actually a revised version of the one on fanfiction.net. i made grammatical corrections, made the sentences flow better, and overall just tweaked and fixed a bunch of things in it that bothered me.
Pact Chapter 2: Bar Fight Part 1
Also as a heads up, chapter 3 will be delayed due to revision and of course sex scene ;) also big shout out to my buds who helped me with this! editor jon sanders beta reader razukai still looking for one more beta reader!
Stone and Wolf (Part 11)
I may revise this story later, but for now, i'm just going to be glad that it's done. enjoy everyone! and if you ever want more s and w, or anything else, just clamor for it and i'll see what i've got in the magic bag. thanks!
Believe – Chapter 23: Last hill
While the others began to silently talk with each other, imya went back to her revision of the journey she had done so far. liam, the male deer, which also was called a stag.
Dangerous Business Ch. 1 (Revised)
revised first chapter to my story, hopefully it's better. let me know in the comments!
Caught in the Storm: 1 (Redo)
First story people revised, feel free to respond on any suggestions or requests. names and places are coincidental as they are not intent on reflecting any real-world basis.
Behind Locked Doors | Finale
I don't know if i'll go back and revise them later, but maybe i will. i understand, as this was my first project i have many areas where i need to improve. some of you have already told me and i thank you for your constructive criticism.
Prouloge: A Quaint Beginning
I do know that the first chapter will need revision, much to terrance's delight. originally this was just a bunch of pages in my journal, trying to figure out ways to implement the next chapter.
Second Chances : Chapter 8
No matter how many times i revise i really don't know for sure until i put it out there and readers comment. as always i want to thank everyone for their favs/watchs/votes and especially the comments.
To Love
Unlike most of my older things, i haven't revised it much since i wrote it, so the quality might be somewhat lower than my other stories (it was during my thick-chokey-inundation-of-description phase).