Breaking the Barrier: Chapter 9
And if it doesn't, guess who's going to be doing the revisions. if you said me, give yourself a bucking cookie. i stand from my chair and stretch, hearing several pops and feeling some stress melt away.
The Stray Cat, Ch. 2
Afterward, we would meet back at the abandoned building, or "hideout" as our still-superhero-infatuated selves liked to call it, to share the new intelligence with each other, and revise our plans.
Contest Entry: Tron Skates (Gluepaw)
He even went out of his way to help carlson revise his blueprints to correspond with the updated shoe, along with pointing out specific areas that would allow augmentation - stating that a device placed anywhere else would cause severe discomfort or the automation
Stone and Wolf (Part 11)
I may revise this story later, but for now, i'm just going to be glad that it's done. enjoy everyone! and if you ever want more s and w, or anything else, just clamor for it and i'll see what i've got in the magic bag. thanks!
Second Chances : Chapter 8
No matter how many times i revise i really don't know for sure until i put it out there and readers comment. as always i want to thank everyone for their favs/watchs/votes and especially the comments.
Time Now and Time Than: it all begins somewhere
Ok....this isn't my first story, but i am trying to revise my writing style and story type....i know some people will have comments, but please...don't be too negative....remember...you didn't write it, i did.
Prouloge: A Quaint Beginning
I do know that the first chapter will need revision, much to terrance's delight. originally this was just a bunch of pages in my journal, trying to figure out ways to implement the next chapter.
To Love
Unlike most of my older things, i haven't revised it much since i wrote it, so the quality might be somewhat lower than my other stories (it was during my thick-chokey-inundation-of-description phase).
Character Descriptions
If and when more main characters are added, this will be revised.** **edit 7/15/2013: added jack and ted.** **edit 7/24/2013: added leon.** **edit 7/25/2013: added bullet, manny, sam, vince, timon, zach, nicky, and kota** **edit 7/30/2013: added
Dangerous Business Ch. 1 (Revised)
revised first chapter to my story, hopefully it's better. let me know in the comments!
Caught in the Storm: 1 (Redo)
First story people revised, feel free to respond on any suggestions or requests. names and places are coincidental as they are not intent on reflecting any real-world basis.
Believe – Chapter 23: Last hill
While the others began to silently talk with each other, imya went back to her revision of the journey she had done so far. liam, the male deer, which also was called a stag.