Writing Advice: Show, Tell, Adverbs and Others
It's just as well, as we'd likely slip into a longer scene that would slow the pacing down, and remove a lot of the suspense and surprises that come as the rest of the film answers those questions.
Darzarath - To Expose the Shadow
Ascar kept noticing some silent commotion among the film crew. the director especially seemed to be holding on to the chair by the nails. that's when darzarath pulled her first ace.
A Saturday Night In 1924
**A Saturday Night In 1924** By: DankeDonuts [https://dankedonuts.sofurry.com/](https://dankedonuts.sofurry.com/) "You won't find anything officer. I run a dry establishment." Evie Adler looked on with polite contempt at the gaggle of...
The Crush PART 5
Just like flint in the film, ryan felt victory coursing through his veins. maybe he had a chance... \*more coming soom, got lazy :p
Green Takeaway - Chocobotaur TFs
"trust me, i've had to order a few films from your neck of the woods from time to time, so i've got the bases covered!" "that's some smart thinking!"
Chasing the Sun - Chapter 05: Dinner with Ducks
Seriously, that time when they watched a horror gore film together, tom's comments and reactions were even more terrifying than the film.
One Dot Below the I (#5)
There's nobody here and the air is tight as clingfilm an illuminated kitchen imposes itself with its clutter a toystore let loose under water but the distance to the i that films each who and every where equals zero after all entirely the day
One Dot Below the I (#2)
I have my memories, my film, my images, my monitor but where did home, warmth and my lungs go, mother?
Beautiful
Like a summer morning, like a winter night like a spring apple after the very first bite like a piece of gold hauled up from the brine like a bottle of vintage wine, a new spool of twine like woodsmoke and diesel, the smell of autumn like a 1930's film
Power
The simplest of words are now twisted and mutated into the grotesque, a horror film from which there is no escape.
Chapter 5 - Poetry
Wanda had behaved herself while they finished filming the scene, and they didn't have to work together any more after that. still, the events from earlier in the day left him a bit frazzled.
Zistopia: Inner City Blues Chapter 5
"i need you to send some film downstairs to be developed. and i need you to take this camera to my desk. and it's an emergency, orders straight from captain whitebuck."