Editing
I will fix sentences that make no sense, move paragraphs around, and correct grammar errors that make me sound like a fifth grader. draft 3 (and beyond): this draft is where i begin to polish my writing.
The aqua portal-part 2
When adam climbed up the fifth branch above him he saw the thing that was breathing heavily. it looked...odd. it had small fins on the back palms of this animal, it had a float thing on its neck was yellow; it had a small bit of blubber on its body.
Lost in space...
Is stood in the contract we signed...they gathered the helium 3 from a meteorite that is why they are so expensive.anyway the mine is proving to be very productive and my pay is not too bad,i've been on this planet for 4 years now and almost done with the fifth
Gemini – book 2 – chapter 5: Rescued
#5 of gemini - book 2 the fifth chapter of glaives adventure. i don't own mlp "why are you running away? you're only delaying the inevitable. why not just give up now, it'll be easier for the both of us."
[Detective Thursdays] Egg on Your Face
#5 of detective thursdays nine a.m. that morning found me, still a bit damp around the edges thanks to the rain, at camela's on fifth and bay. i gave uki the day off. i sat at the dinner's counter, a cup of deep red tea steaming in front of me.
The Eternal Night
You can imagine what happened after the fifth phase had finished frozen death. "_humans. i still find myself wondering how the hell they weren't made extinct when 2012 hit."
Daggers of Darkness, Book #5: "The First Ones" - Prologue
#1 of daggers of darkness book #5, "the first ones" here's the prologue for the fifth book of my sci-fi adventure series, daggers of darkness, book 5, "the first ones".
Blank Verse Essay on the Haunting of America
Still nonetheless it will forevermore remain the truth: september fifth was once my wedding day, not time nor omnipotence can undo in saecula saeculorum, amen. the universe is meaningless until we break its silence.
Short and Sweet.
"it starts with me high above the skies of some battlefield in some jet, i don't know much about those terrors of the sky but i know the one i was piloting was at the very least fifth generation given by what i saw in the cockpit.
Mesozoic Park (Part 11)
Matt is now five years old and about a month after his fifth birthday, i was called into a meting with my investors.
The Sound of Neon
I can see every architectural detail some designer slaved away on and humans walk past without a second thought: up here on the fifth story, they set the windows at angle to the street, balconies offset the other way in an almost endless geometric pattern
Shifting Shadows- A Character Study, Odd Perspective
"i'm at the corner of greenwich and fifth. can you come get it? i want to go to bed." "yes, but _where_ is it?" "it's dead." "oh. i'll be right there.