Changes
Just a place to talk, brainstorm ideas, get opinions and critique.
Contact - Part 2
And any advice and critique are welcome! i am doing this as a way to tell my stories to the world. and to get better at writing my stories at the same time. on a side note, i have already finished writing part 3 and am in the process of writing part 4.
Gift
Any critiques or comments are welcome. and if you'd like to join our group, here's the link https://t.me/joinchat/cpoezhclggenroeh0yywvg i finished writing the story with a tired paw.
Strangers
In other words, no critiques because i know it sucks.
The Lead Crown: Ch 8.5a, Rude Awakenings
The floor is now open for questions, comments, and critiques!
Only a Shadow - Chapter One
So if i make a few mistakes, i'd like to see some critique so i can improved.
Distant Light ~ Prologue
critique is welcome ~ i'm not the most adept at space-age tech and such, and i'm certainly no physicist, but i hope it at least makes sense, where those parts are concerned... as i said, this is still being worked on, tweaked, edited, reviewed, etc...
The Dragon and the Steed Part 6
Please leave critique :d part 6 'is it really that nice where you come from?' fray asked, his eyes bright with excitement about the thought of his new home.
Blood Rose-4
Anyhow, comments and critiques welcome! add me as a friend and spread the word if you enjoy my work. :3 enjoy! "i need no food as of now. the sisters feed me well." she added and looked off into the distance. she tried to remember her family.
Hedgehog Infinitum
First thing ever written on my own volition, so i would love to hear any and all comments, critiques or questions. i had fun writing it, too.
The Meeting
So going back to the interesting thing at hand, i hope you enjoy the story and please critique me as you see fit. **the meeting** despair... _no... nooo!_ destruction... _...
The Exile
In the lunar capital on the moon, suddenly, the king was starting to act weird, usually the king loves tonitrua as if he is his own son, he is being abused and to the point he got thrown off and crash-landed to the earth (you can stop at this point) any critique