Strangers
In other words, no critiques because i know it sucks.
Rise to Ambition
Please feel free to comment and critique. rise to ambition it seemed like a normal day in the valley where the tyke lived. they were the front line army of the order by birth, the dogs of war. however, this was not a position of nobility.
Riptide: Part 1
I'd appreciate some feedback and critique so go for gold! p.s. i'm a newbie around the tags and age restriction so let me know if anything's up. my name is sean, i'm 22, a fox and single. bummer right?
Changes
Just a place to talk, brainstorm ideas, get opinions and critique.
The Lead Crown: Ch 9.5a, Accountability
Comments, questions, quandaries, critiques, and input is always appreciated. thanks for reading! tranquil waters: the lead crown ch 9.5, accountability the hotel was a fine place to house a base of operations as far as sanmer was concerned.
The Lead Crown: Ch 8.5a, Rude Awakenings
The floor is now open for questions, comments, and critiques!
Only a Shadow - Chapter One
So if i make a few mistakes, i'd like to see some critique so i can improved.
Distant Light ~ Prologue
critique is welcome ~ i'm not the most adept at space-age tech and such, and i'm certainly no physicist, but i hope it at least makes sense, where those parts are concerned... as i said, this is still being worked on, tweaked, edited, reviewed, etc...
The Dragon and the Steed Part 6
Please leave critique :d part 6 'is it really that nice where you come from?' fray asked, his eyes bright with excitement about the thought of his new home.
Blood Rose-4
Anyhow, comments and critiques welcome! add me as a friend and spread the word if you enjoy my work. :3 enjoy! "i need no food as of now. the sisters feed me well." she added and looked off into the distance. she tried to remember her family.
Hedgehog Infinitum
First thing ever written on my own volition, so i would love to hear any and all comments, critiques or questions. i had fun writing it, too.
The Meeting
So going back to the interesting thing at hand, i hope you enjoy the story and please critique me as you see fit. **the meeting** despair... _no... nooo!_ destruction... _...