Those Forgotten IV: Awake [edited]
They said he was in too critical of a condition. it was hard for oren to wait, he wanted to see his boyfriend. when they finally let us them in to see shaun, oren ran to his bed but he wasn't awake.
Poem #11: Words
#11 of poetry critical thinking about human use and connotation of words themselves. wrote it in (not for) english class junior year. _words_ what are words written across the page? what emotions are written into these words?
XCOM 2: Enemy Mine?
The viper had been on her way to work when the terrorists had struck, killing five of the administration soldiers in seconds, and critically wounding another viper sergeant before going to plant explosives on a nearby statue of an elder.
Chapter 27: Determination! Altered Evolution!
I do accept any critics and comments. and most of all thank you for those who participate and help in my story.
The Other Side Ch 3
Also, i want to give a huge thanks to arcane reno for giving me some really good constructive criticism.
Love's Constrictions. pt1 A Perfect Counterpart.
Written, and complete the story, i wanted to post this first bit here on sofurry, to see if anyone else had any interest in this story. no since in finishing a book, if every one thinks its crap -chuckles- so please, feel free to give some constructive criticism
Stray
Please give some helpful feedback and criticism. i'm planning to make this into a series. if the story does well, then i'll continue with the series. more will be revealed then
Aria's Tale- Chapter 1 *Sunday Mass*
Coming-together of like minded individuals, such as you and i, dear reader, and so i put this work out that you might determine for yourself if it is worthy of your time, and if you would suggest anything to me in the way of corrections or intelligent, constructive criticism
Elizabeth's Tale --- A Thirst For Freedom (Chapter 1)
I hope that everyone will be fair in their constructive criticism. i appreciate any suggestions or fixes i should make; i'll take everyone's notes seriously in an equal fashion.
3 Voice
criticism? comment away! :) there were once three dragon species which thrived on their corners of the great world known as pangrandin. they lived apart from other species, the avians and the lupines and the ursine and bovine, and a great many more.
An Unexpected Journey: Chapter 1 - Getting Ready
It is my first time taking a stab at writing my own story so don't be too critical! i will forewarn that the first few chapters will focus more on character and plot development but it will pick up after that. the next chapters will be longer!
"Daggers of Darkness" - Cast of Major Characters
I only ask that you please keep criticisms constructive and polite. story, characters, and related art © 2013-2017 ronald j. lebeck (that's me).