Hell Jumpers
I'd rather have criticism then praise, so put plenty of it (constructure criticism please).
Chapter One
Hey guys this is my first work on here and i have not done creative writing in two years (i've been doing argumentative and analysis essays for my ap classes) so i would really enjoy it if you guys would criticize me and don't be nice i need someone like simon
All Good Things, Chapter 1
The beaver lifts a brow, resting an elbow on the counter and gazing up at caleb with a critical eye. "you're practically bubbly." "oh, he always is, didn't you know?"
Furry Little Secret (ch.1)
Oh and please it's constructive criticism, no flamers, no bashers - yes, there is a difference. constructive criticism: arigato! flamers/bashers: sayona**
Mewtwo and Lucario
And please criticize me if you dislike the story! i need to become a better writer and criticizing is one of the only ways for me to get better. oh, and there may be a second part. still debating it with myself.** _
Lost Into The Past Chapter 1
All feedback is appreciated, even negative feedback, as long as it's constructive criticism. anything that isn't constructive criticism i'll most likely ignore, as it won't help me in any way.
Chapter 6: Differing Views
He was critically injured with the first hit, and i checked him over physically as well as with the pokédex. "that's enough i think. that was highly unexpected. you, cheren, tranquil, remember this, this was a one shot victory.
Toner's Guide To Win A Million (Finale Pt 2)
Barbara & eddy, the restaurant critics. "we've noticed they spelled critics wrong for the first half of the race," eddy says, "critics isn't spelled with a q."
A Tale of Two Tails (Intro)
#1 of a tale of two tails i've written things before but this is my first furry story so please any criticisms would really be appreciated :3 (intro) _"i'm gay."_ i thought to myself with a sudden realisation.
Moving On
Drop a comment or toss me a message; i deeply appreciate comments and criticism, and make attempts to improve my writing based on them. i would also like to thank mr.
The Wanderer
I appreciate every comment and piece of criticism that comes my way, and try to use it to improve subsequent writing. i would also like to thank several friends, mr.
The End and The Beginning - Character Sheet - Aran Winwood
+2 15 (+2) dexterity 11 12 (+1) constitution 14 +3 17 (+1) intelligence 11 11 (+0) wisdom 11 11 (+0) charisma 12 13 (+1) [features & traits] second wind (1d10+9 hp/rest) fighting style (superior technique) action surge (+1 action/rest) improved critical