Love in Being Different: Ch. 1
But be nice about, i'd love constructive criticism, but i don't handle hurtful criticism very well. let me know what you furs think! ~enjoy!
A previous verson of my story idea, please not this is a beta version of my story line written long ago
Her family wasent a ordinary family her father a don of a powerful growing mafia, he mother was gunned down a two ago and was put in critical condition today was the last day she she would have to go into sugery to save her life
All's Fair - Part 2
Your votes/comments/criticisms are welcome. thanks!
Experiment 261 Chapter 8
One of my colleagues had been critically injured, and is in a critical but stable condition in hospital. we...have to be prepared for the possibility that we may not find them again...they are former military.
Chapter One
Hey guys this is my first work on here and i have not done creative writing in two years (i've been doing argumentative and analysis essays for my ap classes) so i would really enjoy it if you guys would criticize me and don't be nice i need someone like simon
Lost Into The Past Chapter 1
All feedback is appreciated, even negative feedback, as long as it's constructive criticism. anything that isn't constructive criticism i'll most likely ignore, as it won't help me in any way.
Chapter 6: Differing Views
He was critically injured with the first hit, and i checked him over physically as well as with the pokédex. "that's enough i think. that was highly unexpected. you, cheren, tranquil, remember this, this was a one shot victory.
Toner's Guide To Win A Million (Finale Pt 2)
Barbara & eddy, the restaurant critics. "we've noticed they spelled critics wrong for the first half of the race," eddy says, "critics isn't spelled with a q."
The End and The Beginning - Character Sheet - Aran Winwood
+2 15 (+2) dexterity 11 12 (+1) constitution 14 +3 17 (+1) intelligence 11 11 (+0) wisdom 11 11 (+0) charisma 12 13 (+1) [features & traits] second wind (1d10+9 hp/rest) fighting style (superior technique) action surge (+1 action/rest) improved critical
Moving On
Drop a comment or toss me a message; i deeply appreciate comments and criticism, and make attempts to improve my writing based on them. i would also like to thank mr.
The Wanderer
I appreciate every comment and piece of criticism that comes my way, and try to use it to improve subsequent writing. i would also like to thank several friends, mr.
A Tale of Two Tails (Intro)
#1 of a tale of two tails i've written things before but this is my first furry story so please any criticisms would really be appreciated :3 (intro) _"i'm gay."_ i thought to myself with a sudden realisation.