A Failed Duty - Chapter 9
Disclaimer: the following will contain homosexual individuals and relationships and may be an interesting commentary on life, death, immortality, god, gods and various religions.
HEADQUARTERS'S UNDER SIEGE!!!!
Author's commentary: don't you just love a cliff hanger?x3
Episode 001: Comes the Thunder - part 1
Bernie and penny had tome to do occasional commentaries, but rick talked for most of the time, and he continued when they went down the bus, and until they separated for they classes. penny breathed as she was far from rick's talkative mouth.
Programmed for Cute
She dryly asked, not appreciating his demeaning commentaries at all. sharply the giant conqueror's eyes set upon the giantess android, who shook at their imposing, piercing gaze! "you will serve me as my maid, and i will spare you." "eww!
Treacherous Shoals Part 1
Quickly spinning the camera on a tripod before her to contribute additional commentary for a recording that couldn't possibly have been live before swinging back to await the response she'd demanded.
Naira's Search, pt. 2 (MHO)
"unnecessary commentary aside," ryvis said, turning back to naira. "he has a point. lykou already went missing, we don't need to lose you as well, naira." "i know, i.... didn't mean to," naira said, deflating a bit.
Tea is Served
The stallion offered only fairly obvious commentary, as if his tongue had been loosened by the camaraderie; the drake was impervious to the effect of her usual female's wiles, his own conversation speaking of everything and nothing.
Alice Dippleblack in On The Run Ch4
Danahlia often interrupts the murin to add her own colorful commentary and alice listens, thinking how different her life has become since meeting these two, how fluid.
Highschool Life Chapter 8.5: Let's Explore Ken's House!
Until then, stay tuned," aunt minako says in a commentary sounding voice. i don't know what she's talking about, honestly. "mmm, this is great!" tabitha scarfs down her omuraisu with vigor, leaving a bit of a mess on the table and on her face.
Chapter 10: Trade Routes of the South
It is the expected commentary of mikal and korzon that cause her to hesitate. she watches them from the corner of her eye. "come on korzon, let me see it." mikal grabs for his older brothers paw only to be pushed away. "it's fine, leave it be."
Star Fox: Ascension #01 ORIGINS
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Ember Tails, ch3 (pt.4)
"and providing a running commentary about graphics, design, user interface, and what else not!" kenneth took a verbal jab at his wife, the mightyena suddenly looking innocently in every direction except at her husband.