Writing Tips
Which kind fits better? if you are going for detail, vary your language. sex scenes that repeat the same words over and over are tedious.
A Very Safe Place
Her eyes fell down, scanning along her standing form, as bare as hers, though obviously better fed.
Winter Help – Chapter Six
And i like heirloom tomatoes, which don't grow fast enough to suit him, but they do taste better."
Family Days 19
All of them blushed a little, but marion made it much better by acting like it was natural.
Revaramek the Resplendent: Chapter Two
Would that make you feel better?" as her idea grew, mirelle smirked at the foul creature. “oh, i suspect a little woman's revenge would make me feel much better." “very well." the dragon pushed himself up onto all fours, folding his wings.
Rogues and Dragons: Tangled Emotions
“this feels…much better than i expected," rykel chuckled at the irony. a day ago, he would have never believed he could enjoy a dragon's tongue this much. “you're colder than my claws. my belly will warm you better than my breath."
Track and Field: Part 2
Hopefully, as i got to know red better myself too, he would be good enough. hopefully i'd be good enough for him.
Revaramek the Resplendent: Chapter Thirty
Father always knew how to make him feel better.
Ocean Depths part 6
If he was a better man, then maybe. if he was smarter, it might be possible. better looking, then there would be a chance, they would have a chance... if he was anyone else, anyone, then this might be possible.
Silver Lining - 1
I'm sure i'll feel better when we get in the air and i got a job to do. always feel better with a job." "yeah? well just stick with me and do as i say. keep your head, and you'll be alright." "can do, cap'n." hah. captain.
Revaramek the Resplendent: Chapter Sixty Two
"because i'm a better flier than you!" smiling, nyramyn tugged at his tail spines, stretching out their webbing. "right? right?" "yes, nyra, yes!" revaramek shook his head, trying to pull his tail from his grasp. "you're a better flier than i am!"
Revaramek the Resplendent: Chapter Seventeen
But you’re nothing more than the worst parts of better developed characters from better plotted stories! you were cobbled together from ego and lewdness and arrogance and clumsiness!