Ryan's Life
This is my first story so feel free to give me some criticism haha. well i do believe i will continue this story as soon as i get the time. a very sleep deprived drake named ryan woke up sometime in the afternoon.
where i came from chapter 1 (beach landing)
#1 of where i came from where i came from. chapter one. beach landing seeing as this is my first story please offer any advice you may have about this. this story takes place during ww2 at the battle of okinawa.
Daily Tale 07/24/14: Sick Day
This is my first story. if you could give me feedback and critique i'd love it. also, if you find any grammar or spelling errors please point them out.
The Day That I Meet a Hero Chapter 01 REDO
This will be my first story.... it won't be a big one.... a bit of a small one. i hope you enjoy it very much! :-7 the year is 2045.......
On The Road We Walk On
Thanks guys leave comments of how i did its my first story so i hope i did well!ol
Life Changes: Chapter 1 : The Night Draws Closer
This is my first story so please read and review thanks : dj hak --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ..."i love you".
The Meeting, the Greeting, and the Heating
This is my first story, so cut me some slack .^\_^
Chatline: Epilogue
Since this is my first story, i really want to go back and give it a complete rewrite since there is so much i did and didn't do because i didn't yet know how to approach it or just didn't know better.
The life of Red the red panda
This is my first story and its not finished but i wanted to see what you guys thought the life of red the red panda: the past "hey guys it red here i'm anthro red panda. but i'm not like other red panda's i look like a normal
Zootopia: Time Is Immaterial
Ps: this is my first story of this type, so please no flames.)** * * * beep, beep, b\* the alarm was brought to an abrupt hold as a limp nick woke up. the early mornings had begun taking a toll on the usually lazy fox.
The Resurrection of Eric - Preface
If you haven't read my first story, the life of another, you may find yourself a bit lost when it comes to understanding things like chakras. that said, it should flow well enough on its own.
Riverton High. Ch.1
This is my first story so no flames please and if you can figure out a better title than mine, i would appreciate it,thanks for reading.