How does everyone feel about my stories?
I guess i just want some feedback. i don't get a lot of comments on my stories, and i'd really like to know what people are thinking about my stuff. i like to imagine that i'm doing just fine, but it's hard to really be sure, ya know?
Gargoyles: Clan of the South- Part 2
feedback is greatly desired. this is the raw un edited version, and is subject to updates. the sun descended on the horizon. as night fell on the manhattan skyline the gargoyles woke from their stone sleep.
Gargoyles: Clan of the South- Part 1
feedback requested. this story is subject to being edited he landed in a darkened alleyway, his wings aching from the amount of gliding he just did. he wasn't tired but his breath sounded loud to his own ears.
A small update
Hello Everyone, I haven't been writing much lately due to the fact it's hockey season and I'm juggling that plus work amongst other more mundane real-life obligations. My pet rabbit also recently died so I just got over that little emotional trauma....
Blood and Shadow- Chapter 2
Without another word Hybrin stepped out of the tent, leaving the women to the task of bathing, and dressing the newly liberated feline. Night had already begun to fall and the temperature was rapidly dropping. Hybrin could feel the cold wisps of wind...
Under the influence Pt. 1 (Draft/Feedback Wanted)
Olivian couldn't remember seeing the grand hall of his lineage populated like this. Not that the admittedly clumsy structure of mud, stone, and wood had ever been a grand sight, to begin with. Still, his father -and his father before him- had...
project X (Pt 4)
Me and feedback will share one and you guys can use the other to hold your stuff." rex said taking a seat at a pile of rubble. "you did? t...t...tt.that's great!!!" feedback yips happily.
project x (pt 3) the calm before the storm
"no don't go feedback if you're going i'm coming too." i'm sorry i can't let you do that." feedback said "uhh guys i can't keep them down much longer." he said slashing another zombie. "i'm sorry goodbye" feedback said handing foxtrott the sword.
The New World
This maybe the start of a new story, give me your feedback to let me know if you would read it and also feel free to give me ideas on what to write or put in it thank you very much for your feedback. remember this is for all ages in the year 2015, a new,
"Wolf Boy" a Fantasy Novel
I sincerely hope with continued work and feedback that i can shape this into being a published work that can be enjoyed by many.
My Pudgyville Fanfic S1E8
This seller does have good feedback. you can also check what type of feedback buyers left by clicking on the number next to the heart. the chart displays by color what type of feedback was left.
Chapter Seven
If awdae were to turn up the gain almost to the point of feedback, ey could try and make noise in various points throughout the auditorium. the more feedback ey generated, the more sound the mic was picking up.