#1 of the dark streets
i came back to the project i'd abandoned, and decided it was time to rethink the first few chapters, and to rewrite out a lot of the small errors i'd made.
Novel, Preview, Reboot, The Dark Streets
Chapter one: Were it all began
I think I will start the story from the beginning. So our story will start with my childhood. I never knew my parents, the first thing I remember is the god awful orphanage.
The orphanage itself looked bright and...
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Suddenly:
"Adrenaline inducing, testosterone filled, dangerous, stupid, illicit, loud, these are all a few words that sum up how I ruined my life."
"It's not surprising really, if you're a nobody and you're good; you attract attention. Usually it's...
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#1 of walking these streets
one
here i was, slowly cruising along 4th street, just along the edge of the red-light district, when my comp beeps intrusively.
Bad Language, Character Development, Near Future, Plot Development, Relationships, Sci-Fi, Speciesism, Story Progression, Story Series, Violence (Not In Yiff)
You pass by me,
every day,
on the crowded streets.
you say hello; i say goodbye.
you serve me food,
ring up my beer,
tax my cigarettes.
i give you money,
and your life goes on.
we see each other often.
but you don't know me...
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street tacos. and some awesome mexican soda."
he waited for a moment, looking for some sort of acknowledgement in brennan's eyes, but got nothing in response, so he continued, "so i figured i may as well ask if you wanted to go.
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No darkness in your arms
by draconicon
the snow swirled around the lampposts along the street, the already cold night air made colder by the unpredictable gusts of wind that blew down the streets.
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"they wanted to put me away for three years, then they found out i lived on the street. they probably thought they were doing me a favor or something.
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Feel free to comment about what you think, i love to hear feedback ^^
chapter two: life on the streets
life on the street was great. it may sound weird, but i loved it. i wandered around the first day, pondering on how i was going to get a decent meal.
Children, Cinder, Clean, First Person, Fox, Halfbreeds, Sci-Fi, Story Series, Street rats, theif