#1 of dark stormy n..revised
this is a revised version of the original which can be found in my other folder i am writing the revised version for english because i got a fifteen chapter novel assignment right after i wrote the original so i just copied and
College, Husky, Wolf, revised
As the title says, this is not the sixth chapter i know some have been waiting a long time for, and I know I should probably be putting this in a journal post but...I figured this would probably be seen more than a journal entry.
First, an...
Clean, Revision proposal, Story Progression, Story rewrite
#1 of guardians downfall revised
i am sorry everyone for the lack of uploads, so i have decided to release part one of guardians: downfall revised and edited, this will be a part of the final copy of the book and will showcase the revisions and editing that
Action, Adventure, Drama, Edited, Fiction, Final product, Gay, Guardians, Guardians Downfall, No-Yiff, Novel, Revised and Edited, Science Fiction, Serenity, Starship, Straight, Violence, downfall, revised
Prologue
As the pencil, a lost fragment of my past, sails through the air I begin to wonder why I wanted fame and fortune. Was it because everyone knows you for everything good you have done and won't tease you for a lack of anything? Or was it that I...
Alternative, New, Revision, Sci-Fi, Zealand, bullied, fame, needs, nerd, old, time, travel, universe, writing
After two hours had elapsed, they had finished revising last week's math lesson and also finished up on homework.
Adolescent, Avaeria, Blind, Blindfold, Character Development, City, City of Wings, Clan, Dragon, Dragoness, Fledgling, Friendship, Lessons, Paint, Painting, School, Schoolmates, Student, Study Group, Study Session, Teenager, Teenagers, Tuition, Young, classmates, disabled, education, friend, friends, learning, students, studying, tutor
My patience for making revisions based on information that could have been provided earlier will be limited, so please be as detailed with your wishes as you can from the beginning!
Commissions, terms of service
The massive revisions required for parts 1 and 2 were frankly embarrassing, and a hard lesson in the importance of the editing process that i won't soon forget. downside is, part 3 is taking much longer than i thought it would.
Grimdark, Twins
Afterwards, i'll go back through and do a major revision on the series. gotta get'em all ready for publication and such, y'know?
lots of changes to be made, based on everyone's feedback!
now...
Fox, Snow Leopard, married, wedding
Every revision will be released here, even the finished version. this particular revision is unedited, and was not proofread. it was written solely to see how much i could do in a couple hours, and the quality of rushed work.
Adventure, Alternate Reality, Armageddon, Assimilation, Betrayal, Clone, Conquest, Cyberpunk, Death, Destruction, Disaster, Fight, Fighting, Magic, Military, Mutant, Science, Space, Story Progression, Tribal, Undead, Violence (Not In Yiff), War