Prologue - Out of Character
The wolf's head shot up, suddenly hearing a voice that seemed to be narrating everything he did. "show yourself!" cried the spooked wolf. "i cannot show myself," replied the voice. "i am the narrator.
As you know Bob, show don't tell: Srsly (7 shows, no tells!)
In that i'm using narrative techniques as soon as i start going on about 'damn cans' and 'some kid'. the difference is the narrator is, it would appear, john himself. if i wrote it like this - 'john walked down the street, hating every step.
TheFurryParable Ch.7
Danny slowly walks towards the noisy door, fearful of what waits for him on the other side....Danny twists the door handle, and proceeds to push open the door.and what he sees is......amazing.... "its.....its.....its.......... GOD!" Danny gawks in...
The Feline Creature
The feline creature was conceited and, one evening, while staring at his reflection on the still seas, he started to think about his magnificence. He was the wind and the breeze which shook the foliage with its swift touch; he was the goshawk and the...
Writing Tips
I don't recommend switching the narrative perspective though. that might work for some people, but i personally am not a fan of it. try it if you wish, but i advise sticking with a single narrative view throughout the story.
Culling the Fold
#2 of scribbles a narrative poem, or a prose poem, or a meditation on the end. culling the fold and god looked down upon the face of the world which they had created so long ago. in their absence it had changed, and yea, it displeased them greatly.
Writing Tips vol. 2
It can also be very well used when narrating a scene. i'll use an example sequence from one of my own stories to show this.
slutever: a found poem of her words
I am driven to produce incomplete narratives i am driven to produce incomplete narratives . and these incomplete narratives often speak of abandonment, loss, and the mundane.
Kyurex (Pokemon): Part 29 - Below Zero
The umbreon lazily turned his eyes at the narrator, who was, like all the other narrators from before - a machamp. the six armed creature then suddenly pointed at kyurex. the whole crowd turned towards the tower the umbreon was using to spectate from.
So close yet so far introduction
**So close, yet so far.** **INTRODUCTION:** In this world, several planets coexist; several world near to each other's, some livable others a lot less. At times it's not world that coexist but dimensions. One next to each other's, not even having...
Prince Neo
This is a record of the journey my older brother took. From the day I was asked to start keeping it till the day I finished. For those who do not know we are dragons, of the people of the high dragons, I am Lei the 9th daughter of King Gor of the...
If I ever found a genie
What am I doing? I'm lying down on the couch doing absolute nothing while wanting to do something like I always do. I wish I wasn't so bored. I wish genies genies were real so I could wish that I wasn't bored. I wonder if they are real but it's just...