Help me!

I have been working on the second chapter of A glaxie devided and i have hit a brick wall. I need some opinions about this character discription. I will not post until i have opinions! \*Note note in the exact context text will be changed later\*...

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Dante, Origins Chapter 3: Always Read the Fine Print

This is quite a few chapters long but will get to the transformation soonthis story will contain in it's due course: m (solo), h(solo), m/f, m/m, m/f/f, m/m/m, and m/h, (and possibly some other fun combinations as well ;p).

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My Sword, My Clan 03 - My New Friends

"well," added dahlia, "he must be quite lonely, all dead in the afterlife with nothing but books to read, perhaps he just wanted some time alone m-maybe we should give him a chance?"

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