The Furry Dead Chapter VII - The Path Decided
Hi everybody. For those of you still reading this series, how do you feel about it? Is it too slow, too much exposition? Or is it doing a good job of describing characters and setting the scene and themes of the setting? I'd love to get your feedback...
Not So Retired Any More XXVII
Chapter XXVII - Loose Ends Sato sat awake in the early hours before dawn, his bad leg propped up on the ottoman, his eyes glued to the wide-screen television set Arlen had bought for football and race day viewing. No such divertissements occupied...
Torpedo Run Chapter 3
Comments are always highly appreciated! Chapter 3 Captain Leith set down her tablet, uttering a sigh of frustration she hoped was soft enough not to carry. Her officers were at their stations, the bridge lit up like Christmas with read-outs as...
The Furry Dead Chapter XIII - Storms' Eyes
Chapter XIII - Storms' Eyes Captain Summer swiped his left arm across his forehead, and couldn't help but wince as the sliced flesh there felt like it had parted yet more, blood streaming down his face and blinding one eye as he rode pell-mell...
Not So Retired Any More XXVIII
Chapter XXVIII - Debrief, Reunion Sato Goza had gotten the call and immediately made arrangements to fly, despite the discomfort he knew would be the price more so than the money. True to form, the puddle-jumper to San Francisco had been...
Torpedo Run Chapter 7
Chapter 7 Jenny Greenway groaned softly, each pulse of pounding pain in her skull tinged with growing nausea and an ever-encroaching horrid sense of being conscious again. The cat turned her head to the side, and heaved once, dryly, before a...
Not So Retired Any More XIX
Chapter XIX - Gavin had left the security office a few minutes after he last talked to his boss and psychotic battle-buddy, climbing up through the oversized vent systems used in the hospital. Getting out of the security room unseen had been easy....
Not So Retired Any More XXVI
Not sure how good my action writing was here. Does it keep a good sense of pace and suspense? Comments welcome :) Criticism is also totally okay. Also - Be aware, violence and a distinct lack of porn in this chapter! Noes! Chapter XXVI - Deadly...
The Furry Dead Chapter VIII - Pride
Chapter VIII - Pride The muscular tiger lowered his shoulder and unleashed a mighty shield slam, unwinding his body's coiled posture to smash his opponent's thick steel helm with a thunderous clang that sent the other duelist reeling into the stone...
Torpedo Run Chapter 34
Chapter 34 Under a sky pregnant with looming storm, forty thousand Marines boarded landing craft to be borne upward, through that lightning-lit sky and toward whatever fate lay beyond it. Past the rumbling ominous bruise-black storm indeed above...
The Furry Dead Chapter XIV - Pressure
Hey everyone - Let me know what you think! Is Captain Summer coming off as a grumpy badass, or is he too cliche? I'd love to hear what you all think about the character development and thematic elements of the story. Trying to figure out if I need to...
First Arc: The Fallen Kings -- Chapter 5 -- Part One -- {A Bad Omen}
**_-- [???, 12:24 PM, Satruday, May 12, Unknown Whereabouts] -- _** A pocket watch was seen held by an unknown figure as he gazed at the time. It was exactly 12:.24. "Our message comes in precisely one hour." **_--[Bureau Headquarters, 12:25 PM,...