"Honey, you missed dinner," Jamie said as Nyeusi came down into the basement.
"I saved you a plate," a Border Collie who was sitting in one of the lounge chairs, said.
Nyeusi glanced over to the border collie and nodded. "Thanks Kes, I appreciate...
A Life Never Lived, Black Lab, Border Collie, Dialogue Heavy, Dylan, Golden Retriever, Leopard, Nyeusi, Plot Development, jamie
Pretty dialogue heavy, but i promise there's action on the horizon!
please remember to leave a comment to share any thoughts you have about this chapter! i can only grow with feedback!
Adventure, Canine, Cervidae, Cervine, Custom Species Names, Deer, Fantasy, Husky, Hybrid, Konuul, Magic, Male, Primitive, Raptuva, Sereva, Tribal, Wolf
This is definitely the most dialogue heavy chapter i have written so far. as always, i'm very appreciative of critiques and constructive feedback.
Abuse, Adventure, Bears, Colonial, Dinosaurs, Emotions, Family, Foxes, History, Humans, Industrial, Lions, Love, Magic, New Era, Series, Tragedy, chronicles, expedition, journey, magnus, nationalism
#3 of the halfblood
chapter three (duh)
this is my first dialogue heavy chapter, so any tips there would be helpful...
Canine, City, Fighting, Growlithe, Hand-to-hand, Love, Lucario, Night, Plot Development, Pokemon, Story Series, houndoom
Somewhat dialogue-heavy again- but hey, this group has plenty to talk about! also, please make sure to read the author's note.
Adventure, Canine, Cervidae, Cervine, Custom Species Names, Deer, Fantasy, Feline, Husky, Hybrid, Jarzin, Konuul, Magic, Male, Panther, Primitive, Raptuva, Scalie, Sereva, Tribal, Wolf, felid, wusky
This one is a bit longer than the others, and it's very dialogue heavy. but it felt wrong to break it up into other chapters, it's all a series of moments that play into one another so i'd rather post 6000 words and retain that authenticity.
Coyote, Gay, Jackal, Leopard, M/M, Male, Raven, Romance, Story Progression, Tiger, Western, Wolf
#66 of mystic heart odyssey
one more dialogue-heavy chapter before we get back to some more action-focused stuff! hope you enjoy these bits of character interaction and lore.
also double-lol at me ever saying this would be the shortest episode yet.
Adventure, Canine, Cervidae, Cervine, Custom Species Names, Deer, Fantasy, Husky, Hybrid, Jaguar, Jarzin, Konuul, Leopard, Magic, Male, Panther, Primitive, Raptuva, Scalie, Sereva, Tribal, Wolf, wusky