A Life Never Lived - Chapter 1 - Section 1
“Yes, I understand. Thank you." Surprise, surprise, a black leopard hybrid thought as he ended the call he was on and looked down at a pad of paper. On the top sheet was a list of counselor offices and their phone numbers. All but two of the offices...
A Life Never Lived - Chapter 1 - Section 2
“How long until the Doctor comes," Jamie asked as she tossed her shower towel into the hamper and pulled out fresh clothes. Nyeusi glanced at the clock that sat on the bedside table. “About ten minutes." “TEN MINUTES? We aren't even dressed." She...
A Life Never Lived - Chapter 1 - Section 4
"Honey, you missed dinner," Jamie said as Nyeusi came down into the basement. "I saved you a plate," a Border Collie who was sitting in one of the lounge chairs, said. Nyeusi glanced over to the border collie and nodded. "Thanks Kes, I appreciate...
Lessions in SIgn languege with a werewolf
One is that a big weakness of mine is action and since i usually write dialogue heavy stories, i don't get much chance to actually practice using actions.
Rogue Wind - The Nobles
. \*\* \*\* \*\* \*\* \*\* \*\* \*\* \*\* \*\* \*\* another dialogue heavy chapter finished yay! i can't really think of much to say besides i found this story needed an arctic fox or two.
Second sighting
I realise that college life is very dialogue heavy, and while at times i think that's necessary, there are other times when i think it's a sign that i need to improve the quality of my writing.
A ghostly existence
Just to get one thing clear this work is entirely non-canon and will be very dialog heavy. so i don't want to receive too many comments about the storyline not making sense.
Jayden, Chapter 3
#3 of the halfblood chapter three (duh) this is my first dialogue heavy chapter, so any tips there would be helpful...
MHO - Cult of the Crimson Isles - Chapter 3
Pretty dialogue heavy, but i promise there's action on the horizon! please remember to leave a comment to share any thoughts you have about this chapter! i can only grow with feedback!
Unexpected Visit
Wrote this in more of a play scene style which means this story is more dialogue heavy and has less setup with short descriptions.
The Secret to Proper Paragraphing and Dialogue
Just for the record, i write extremely dialogue-heavy fiction. when i find that a dialogue tag is indeed needed in my story to identify who is talking, i see it as a red flag that indicates that all action has come to a screeching halt.
xar (casual)
(a karraa / rat). it's a very modern setting with a lot of similarities to earth, but still displaced in a distant universe, so it should be pretty relatable at its core. i also wanted to focus more on description and immersion, since i like to be dialogue-heavy