life with a dragon trouble on the road re write
"Not happening Drosmine. You have an oversize load behind the truck. If you try to go any faster you might make the truck roll or slide off the road. Which is of course BAD when you're travelling at around one twenty five in a truck that easily weighs...
Fortune-chapter two Love??? (part two)
It seemed too short, and the charecters progressed a bit too quickly in my opinion, but, i am still learning.