To Whom
Not my best, but it helps to see how much i've improved. to whom does my heart belong? it has not the time to wait. yet it all takes time to find its place. every moment it waits, its dying minute after painful minute.
Chapter 10
By the end of the day, he had improved a significant degree and much fewer of his spells failed. the next day, when james did not go to his pure elementalism class.
Dragon RP-Chat
I welcome constructive criticism,such as how to improve the environments or the stroylines,but if you give me hate i will block you lol. also guys,please don't sign up for the rp until at least the continent pangea campaign is up.
the storm of mind's
#6 of poem fate please comment so i can improve the storm throws me down. in side of my mind. for the chaous wont let me alone. my emotion are spikeing all over the place. were am i cant stand this. confusion at every trun. im so lost inside.
Alien Story and Raffle
I hope to use what i have learned to improve my story proselytize. also anyone who what's their name in the story leave a comment bellow and i will use a generator to chose some to be in the story.
Moonless Night.
Please comment to let me know how i did, or how i can improve. ~\*~\*~\*~\*~\*~\*~\*~\*~\*~\*~\*~\*~\*~\*~\*~\*~ baying for my love. without a star in the sky, no moon to give light. sitting in the dark.
Chapter XVI: Listen To The Wind Blow
Kaeden, for his part, had been making slow, but steady improvements.
Of Wolves and Foxes, Epilogue
"you're certainly improving quickly, aaron. i'm very impressed." the little fox's tail wagged happily. "i'm much better at vulpine." "you're better than i am, that's for sure.
The Origin of Shadow - Chapter 4
Try smelling something, or listening, because that first conversion was to improve your sense. go on, give it a try" i decided to humour him and try it, so i closed my eyes and focused on my sense of smell and hearing.
Passions Flames Pt 3: Training
Mistress eon said "i would like you to train thrisk for a week and a half, improve his endurance and reflexes for the most part." lucas nodded for a bit before whistling shrilly. the whistle hurt my ears and i couldn't help but shudder lightly.
Dragonball Z fanfic Chapter 3: Reunited for a moment
"you have improved old man!" flame said as the blasts canceled each other out, both of them standing tall and looking at one another.
Wolfen - Chapter 15
Just a warning, though, my writing skill has improved some since i first started writing. as the friendly duel began at their camp, david grabbed the satchel that held karthan's soul stone and quietly slipped out behind the trees.