Disproportionate Revenge!
Here's hoping it gets a bit of attention and critique here! hey! look! rainy posts something again! this time it's vore related. my first foray into this kinda thing. if you have any comments or suggestions, feel free to comment! i won't bite!
Every Artist's Dream: Chapter One
critique is appreciated. :3 the sun's rays woke avery up the next morning. he stretched and let out a big yawn, obviously still tired, but, unfortunately, needing to get up. "holy shit, i need coffee."
A Night of Regrets
Brutally honest comments, critiques and tips are all welcome and encouraged. i watched my friend pace around the room like a caged beast. his brown fur was unkempt, wild and ragged.
Hard Headed
If you're interested to join our writing group, join us at: [https://t.me/joinchat/cpoezhclggenroeh0yywvg](https://t.me/joinchat/cpoezhclggenroeh0yywvg) come by to brainstorm ideas, ask for tips on writing or critique, or just hang out and talk!
Spat's Revenge: The Kidnapping
Some critiques or something cause i don't want to keep making crappy stories. now excuse me while i play videogames.
Rise to Ambition
Please feel free to comment and critique. rise to ambition it seemed like a normal day in the valley where the tyke lived. they were the front line army of the order by birth, the dogs of war. however, this was not a position of nobility.
Riptide: Part 1
I'd appreciate some feedback and critique so go for gold! p.s. i'm a newbie around the tags and age restriction so let me know if anything's up. my name is sean, i'm 22, a fox and single. bummer right?
Longing
critiques or criticism in any form is always welcomed the beast drew closer. it's size was mammoth, every step resonating a loud thud and crushing rustle from the grass pounded by it's feet.
A Dream Realized
Feel free to critique my writing though, i am always looking for ways to improve. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- john sat up in bed, his alarm clock screeching
The Tale of Rikama (Working Title)
Constructive critique is both appreciated and encouraged, and vice-versa. our story opens up on korotti prime, named for its first sentient inhabitants. a name which it still carried proudly, unto its desstruction.
DreamLand Part 2
Anyway please leave comments critiquing my work, want to know the reaction from anyone reading this and if they find it interesting enough at the moment and if i should hurry the story up a bit or if this is a good pace im going at.
Just A Little While
Comments, faves, feedback, critiques? they're always welcome! if any of you would be feeling up to seeing this take a turn from your imagination, send me a note and we'll discuss the specifics of the whole deal.