Suncrest - Chapter 27
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Road Hog
X3 as always, comments and critique encouraged. see you all next week!
Concept Ideas for a story
It's in the planning stage, so if you have any suggestions, questions, or critique please tell me so that i know just where to improve. here is a quick description of the plot, characters, and the kind of themes and fetishes it might include.
Tracks
Any and all critique is appreciated, just please be respectful. the snow fell quickly enough to cover his tracks just after he made them. he had a sword sheathed on his back and was bundled up in wool to keep warm.
Wasteland Survivor – Reasons - ch3
By the end of the week we had assembled some fifty or more of the damn things and carried them around to various soldiers to have them disassemble them, critique our work, then hand them back to use to assemble again.
Their Echoes
This is a first and feel free to critique, give feedback and tell me what you think! thank you for checking out this story, i hope you enjoy it. the snow leopard's ears flicked along to the beat to the old clock.
Singularity - Epilogue
Comments and critiques are welcome and encouraged. "carbon..." a voice stirred in the black of a dream, rousing said hybrid from his slumber. "carbon, don't make me hurt you. time to get up."
The Stone- Chapter 4
Please; comment, rate, critique, anything!
Brother Light, Brother Dark: In Which Jaqaran is Made an Accomplice
All comments, critiques, and criticisms are welcome.** by the time donichus had left the building, feeling more or less relieved, jaquaran was still swinging around his sword, being careful to avoid pedestrians as they walked by.
The Lead Crown: Ch 9.1b, Shock and Awe
Comments, questions, quandaries, critiques, and input is always appreciated. thanks for reading!
Three Years - Prologue
critique is very welcome, i want to improve my writing so i can deliver the very best, and if you ever see anything you think should change/written differently or just in general things that seem off, please do tell me so, just be nice about it!
Draconic Beginnings (01)
Any criticism or critique to be offered will be very much appreciated. once apon a time, in realms rife with strife, struggle, and turmoil, there upon a stony precipice, 'neath a cliff and hidden lay a small clutch of eggs.