Yu-Gi-Oh World Tour Chapter 1.5 (rewrite)
#1 of yu-gi-oh tour okay here's a rewrite of the duel action, that i messed up on misreably.
Fox Curse 2
It had to be messed up, her thinking of him like that. but still, her emotions wouldn't suppress themselves. finally, there was rustling in the brush, and before she knew it, aspen had leapt out, all excited to see her. "mira!"
Chimera - Chapter 2
Lépine, you better clean this mess up, otherwise this mishap will be considered on your salary." "as if it made a difference..." the feline mumbled. "excuse me?!"
Chapter 33
I mess up, i know i do . . . and sometimes zalia messes up too . . ." he glanced at his father-in-law hopefully. kel was silent, staring off at the village. keeno went on, determined. "but we always forgive each other.
Heart of Ice Ch.3
I admit, i was thankful they didn't mess up the show, luke especially. i decided to give them my word of thanks, walking up to them.
Kyurex (Pokemon): Part 2 - Falling apart
Everything was messed up. she never would have imagined that their friendship was going to collapse. she turned around, but flak was gone. "i hate you!!! gosh you stupid moron!!!! you messed up everything!!!!"
Ander - Chapter 5, Subchapter 16
"you messed up, hezzi..." he whispered to himself, starting down the path back to the village. "you messed up so badly it isn't even funny."
JTB ch5: Crossroad
Seiya had just recently started this job so you couldn't blame him for messing up. even after getting used to the job mistakes still happened. seiya: "uwah!" cue an unfortunate clattering sound.
Fan Story, McCloud's Story Chapter 1
Well i hope i don't messing up my first job as a designer.' tough me. in the morning, it was 05:45 and damn i still sleepy but i don't want messing my first job. "alright i woke up!" said me as i turning off my alarm.
Gemini – Book 2 – Chapter 2: The Investigation Begins
"i don't see why i have to come along when you're the one who messed up." glaive muttered to himself for the umpteenth time. "because it was still you're assignment!" lance shouted back once more. "just shut up. we've got work to do."
The Art and the Jock Ch.1
Kyle feels rage build up in him as he knows what happened, his teams gear was messed up but they thought it was someone that broke it not them just being rough, so they blame the weakest guy at the school, well the weakest looking that is.
A Pit Bull Love Story (Part 2)
"i'm sorry it's just that i really liked you and i thought i messed up badly when i clawed at your wrist, victor." he looks down at the bandages. "i'm okay i just really wanted to talk to you." "about what?"