Chapter 2 -- The Newcomer (revising)
I got a lucky break at work and was able to work on this enough to bring it here two days ahead of my plans =D If you're under 18, get.out.now. Or lock your door and hope for the best. Chapter 2 Solar stood over the bed...
A Pleasant Coming Out (Revised)
_hello again, _ _with the great help from [newfur](%5c), i'm offering a revised version of the first story i submitted, you can still find it here as i want to keep it for future reference.
A Bronze Rising: Out with the Old
I will revise the story at once!" tobias said, turning his horse about. i raised a paw, "not quite yet. i want you to summon a wood worker here first thing in the morning.
Antler to Antler - Part 5 (Revised)
#7 of antler to antler **a/n - normally i don't like to revise work i've already published, but because the intent of antler to antler was as a screenplay which i have yet to produce, the original posting was always intended to be viewed as a draft rather
Merlin's Revenge Chapter 19
revision of history was the in thing after all. if you didn't like how yesterday went, change it. everyone knew a person's memory was a fickle thing. did she have it on video? was there witnesses?
The Stray Cat, Ch. 4
I had to do a fair amount of revising in this one (which was all deleted because i'm a noob at this site so i had to do it all again), but i think it's much improved now. enjoy! i forced myself to open my eyes.
The Cannon of Civilization
Didn't really revise it that i can remember. i just figured i'd put it somewhere instead of letting it fester in my documents folder for the rest of eternity. :p i dunno. if you like it, say so.
The Creation Of Xrohne Chapter #1
If you are reading this currently, forget about this chapter, and read chapter #1 revised, that's the better of the two, sorry if it caused any inconvenience
Pride Podcast
"give me a break liberal, don't you have history to revise?" "yeah chase, won't you say that sydney and tj are just really good friends?" carl said, pretty much cackling.
Longing
After some revising done this morning, i've created a story in my own little world that you can now explore (though i use the word little loosely here).
Valkyrie - Book 1 -Chapter 8 - Flashback (Revised Edition)
#8 of valkyrie - book 1 - fate and rebirth (revised and reedited) chapter 8 - flashback location: helfhiem (gateway, homeworld) - on the edge of terran space, before the "great scar" approximately 300 years ago it was raining on
not so quite romantic first date, part 2
Know ive put this off for a long time and well a lot of things have happened that is changing the story as well the main character is gonna be my characters new update who is an otterfox cameron is going to be called isaac and is a tolf also i will be revising