The Pillow Book of Sethira: Prologue and Translator's Note
**a/n:** last revised 3/11/2023; mild grammatical edits, nothing major. * * * sleepiness and boredom lingered in the air of the athenaeum like a fog, making the eyelids of all patrons and staff heavy as they inhaled the noxious air.
Spyro: Return of Darkness, Chapter 11 -- Eternity Begins Today
I might put up a revised version of this, who knows...
My Teacher got into my pants 1
Here is the revised version
The Stray Cat, Ch. 3
I did a little revising here and there, seeing as my writing two years ago wasn't quite the caliber it is now. the windows of the casino flew by faster and faster as i hurtled down toward the dark alley below.
Lovely Gardevoir Ch.1(revision)
#1 of lovely gardevoir this is a revision of chapters one and two of my lovely gardevoir story, please comment and share your honest opinion about it. words cased in 'thinking' are thoughts, and verbal comments are cased in "speech".
When rumors turn ugly
It was a second revision, but it would do the job needed. plus some solar panels should they need a jump start. now all he had to do was put it all together. while in the process of repairing the ship, his boss and long time friend stopped by one day.
All's Fair - Part 19b
But as dan pulled into the lot at the correction center i revised that assumption. my stomach was roiling, and i really, physically thought i might throw up.
CANIDITY: Chapter One
The report was typed, had been revised and proofread three times, and i was now rereading it for the final time, after which it would be sent to my supervisor for approval.
Chasing the Sun - Chapter 35: Heavier than Feather
Besides, this file revision was a chance to apologise. he would do them well. for now, the panther stayed on the bed. kevin shifted and turned to lie on his back, his muzzle slightly open. octo took the chance to observe his wolf.
Chapter 3: How long?
I decided to pick this up again after so long i've likely skipped some details that should be carried on from the last chapter but i don't know if i'll be writing much soon so on and off let's call this the un-revised version that if it gets somewhere i'll
The Game is Afoot (A2, B1, C7)
I know the 2nd revision is a huge leap over the rough draft, and the third revision is always a huge jump up from the 2nd, but... i rush through the 2nd to a degree so i can get through the re-write then do all the fine tuning revisions later on.
Tropical Revised - Chapter Two
In the quiet early hours of dawn, the disturbed air whined slightly while a sleek civilian vehicle glided across the near-empty parking lot. It stopped near the front of the school building, and stepped out a tall otter. Rye did always prefer to arrive...