Such a Pig (Pig TF)
Please comment and give feedback "such a pig" (pig tf) isabel was a young girl at the age of 18. her features were petite but still very cute. isabel got wonderful grades and was generally a good person.
Stay the Horse
Lawton: thank you for your feedback. i may have something else here you will like.
Blacklisted Chapter 1: Memories
Don't forget to give me feedback! california state prison is home to some of the world's dangerous criminals. the inmates do not mess around, most of them having serious charges.
Burning Hearts, Chapter 1 -- A New City
Feel free to give me some feedback on this. (sorry for the formatting sf tends to do that). **chapter 1: a new city** night falls over the city of mezeh, the heart of crocodile country.
Cant Take My Eyes Off You CH. 1
#1 of cant take my eyes off you **this is my first ever story, so and feedback is welcome. the characters names are pronounced kausn** **(kaw-son) and seigi (see-gee) hope you enjoy.** a strong, musky smell fills the hallways.
Wolf Tech 1 - The Beta
Please send me feedback; the more feedback i get the more i publish! i have felt i finished the first story, and the second is also here, as i didn't bother changing it.
Spyro: Return of Darkness, Chapter 5 -- The First Portal
I like feedback, even if it's just a "keep it up" or a simple "good". lets me know i'm on the right path. if anything seems a little out of place or doesn't seem right, feel free to question it.
The Patrol part 3
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Dragon Story Ch: 2
feedback greatly appreciated! that's actually the main reason i'm posting this (feedback) so, good, bad, happy, sad, tell me what you think. **chapter 2** the next few days were spent in the forest learning to hunt.
Eagle Transformation
feedback is welcome. a piercing screech echoed through the half-filled auditorium.
Terpsichorean
So as usual, feedback is lovely and so is spreading the word of this! spread the word about the word (of the day)! and enjoy~ terpsichorean- 1. pertaining to dancing 2.
Towers of Seshin: Part 3
He felt pain surge through him; magical feedback. it occurred when something that the mage was trying to control was more powerful than the mage itself.