Towers of Seshin: Part 3
He felt pain surge through him; magical feedback. it occurred when something that the mage was trying to control was more powerful than the mage itself.
A few random updates!
In addition to this i plan to do a full edit of all my work so far, so if you see it's been updated be sure to take a second look and give me your feedback again.
The Wolf's Watch
I'd still appreciate some feedback. "time is short, and, i know you're listening, so, i'll make this quick..." the pain, it still remained. much less than the soul-crushing agony, but still, present.
Cascaded Guardians
I'm excited for this to be my first upload onto sf, and i hope to hear feedback! also, the artwork is not mine.
Boo!
Please provide feedback, as i hope to continue editing and making these acceptable for publication. i'm watching you within this bush, preparing for a quick ambush. now did my appearance frighten, and did your rosy cheeks whiten?
chapter 1:meeting the squad
#1 of military series chapter 1 is finally here hope you guys love and enjoy comment down in the comments and give feedback on what you think as camper walked off the bus that brought him to the military bootcamp.
a time to stop *prolougue
I would love to see feedback on this and this is my first story > **im not your average american teeageer you see im a werewolf and this is how it happened .
Watershed
I i get sufficient feedback (comments are best as always) ill continue. if not, i give up and i think i'll just pe writers block squash me like a bug. on the note: watershed: a turning point "sir, she has every quality requested..."
Animalia
Please provide feedback, as i hope to continue editing and making these acceptable for publication. i've watched the animals at play, they have their love on full display, compassion before simple needs, with lover critter spends the day.
The great escape ( well more like attempt) pt2
feedback is welcome 3 days earlier.. hi i'm terry. i'm 16 and i'm 5'9. i'm a wolf and the majority of my fur is white except for the black patch on my right eye. i read to myself aloud. my cell mate noticed this.
Reflections
The feedback on salazzle dazzle has been stellar thus far, and... honestly, it's restored a lot of my faith in my own writing.
Emulation Practice: Murder, Part 2
Any feedback on this would be helpful, like... if you ever try style emulation, what do you do? out in the bald valley, a rugged, burley brown fellow lifted tall granite slabs, balancing them until they accepted a perfect upright posture.