Tony da Lion: ~Love again~
:p critique is much appreciated. let me know if you see something i can improve upon. if you have any suggestions as to what direction the story takes, feel free to share. who knows, if i like it enough, i might put it in and give you credit.
Nightworld: Epilogue
I am really keen for any kind of review/critique/whatever. as a writer, it's pretty hard to get some distance from your own work, difficult to be objective, you know? anyway.
The making of a book cover - A heresy story
It's difficult to pin down though, since most pieces tend to travel around my friends for critique, que a list of changes.
A time before ours.
I don't mind critique if i get it, but if i get a few likes then ill start doing more poems ^_^ thanks guys<3 poem the cold rain from the clouds brought down upon that dismal day, the lambs that fed upon that ground have all but ran away, the trees that grew
Just Me and You
As always, comments and critiques are welcome.
Bigger, Badder... Crazier
Barbara & eddy (grey wolves)- restaurant critiques; both well known in canada. "we've visited the restaurant tommy & regina opened after the last race," barbara says, "we gave it 5 out of 5 stars." "i still think the spices were a bit much."
Ira's Painting
Their gut suggested a broad, blueish pink base and they made no attempt to critique it. with this base layer completed, some of the paint running a little more than was intended, ira washed the brush and reached for another.
Team Smartz Ch.2 - Cold as Eisbecher
----------------------------- so yah, here's chapter two of the fantastical adventures of antwon and penny, and yes i know that this one may actually be shorter than chapter one but . . . what can i say, i hope that chapter three is longer, as always, critiques
The Hotline
. :3 as always, comments and critique encouraged. see you next friday!
The Lead Crown: Ch 8.5a, Rude Awakenings
The floor is now open for questions, comments, and critiques!
The Warning
You can leave me comments, but most critique will be ignored. remember, i want this to feel unedited and rough, even if the author had some skill in writing. so don't feel bad if i don't listen to suggestions on how to make it work better.
To The Blue
As always, critique is appreciated!