A War To Remember: Chapter One
I'd gladly take any constructive critique. (except the bashing kind, no one likes to be bashed.) i'm native in german and english but i'd like to get my english back on track. sentences might end up longer than they should, grammar might be a little off.
Untitled - Prologue (WIP?)
Leave me a critique or a shout and let me know what you think of it! - aniro **_prologue_** "where am i?" that was the first thought of the creature lying in the forest, laying about amongst the throngs of branches that lined the thick brush.
Brother Light, Brother Dark: In Which Insatisfaction Plagues Donichus
All comments, critiques, and criticisms are welcome.** with donichus giving up the only life he'd come to know well for the past twenty years, the two found little reason to continue their nomadic journey to nowhere in particular.
Black Fifteen
If you're interested to join our writing group, join us at: [https://t.me/joinchat/cpoezhclggenroeh0yywvg](https://t.me/joinchat/cpoezhclggenroeh0yywvg) come by to brainstorm ideas, ask for tips on writing or critique, or just hang out and talk!
Breathing Life--Chapter One
Comments, concerns, critiques go in the comments. [edit] looks like the first time i uploaded it my formatting was thrown off. everything looks like it's fixed now though.
The Loner, Chapter 1
With that in mind, don't hold back with your critiques, if you're inclined to give them. i want to improve, and i can't do that if people are softballing their reviews. thanks, -tr 'stand, even if you only stand alone.'
Rat's Reputation: Redwall, new and improved
It sounds like i'm making lots of critiques, but this is my internal editor at work. these are nitpicks in an otherwise great story. i give the book my hearty recommendation.
Brother Light, Brother Dark: In Which Jaqaran is Made an Accomplice
All comments, critiques, and criticisms are welcome.** by the time donichus had left the building, feeling more or less relieved, jaquaran was still swinging around his sword, being careful to avoid pedestrians as they walked by.
Legend of the Dovahkiin (WIP)
I appreciate any feedback and critiquing on my writing like if i have too much or not enough detail, repeating certain words too much, or if you would want to see the beginning / it continued. but most importantly, enjoy! i heard it before i saw it.
Shade & Luna Chapter 1: Welcome to the (Concrete) Jungle
_this is my first story, please critique it in the comments and don't forget to rate, subscrive, favorite, or anything up to and including worship. thank you._
Disproportionate Revenge!
Here's hoping it gets a bit of attention and critique here! hey! look! rainy posts something again! this time it's vore related. my first foray into this kinda thing. if you have any comments or suggestions, feel free to comment! i won't bite!
Every Artist's Dream: Chapter One
critique is appreciated. :3 the sun's rays woke avery up the next morning. he stretched and let out a big yawn, obviously still tired, but, unfortunately, needing to get up. "holy shit, i need coffee."