A Pleasant Coming Out (Revised)
_hello again, _ _with the great help from [newfur](%5c), i'm offering a revised version of the first story i submitted, you can still find it here as i want to keep it for future reference.
Dreamcatchers chapter 1 revised
I'm sorry, but I'm going to have to let you go. "Those words struck me like an electric fly swatter. I had no idea it was coming. Unable to pay attention, i stared at the cracks in the floor. there were so many of them, propably from earthquakes. I...
Tropical Revised - Chapter Five
Over the next couple days, school continued rather similar as the first few days. While at school, the two otters often spent time together whether it was between periods or on their breaks. Often at least one of Rye's veteran friends would join in....
Tropical Revised - Chapter Four
Sleeping quite peacefully, Rye resented the fact that his alarm clock brought him back from the realm of dreams. Tossing around on the sofa, he couldn't escape the blaring sound of the alarm clock. "Alarm, off," he said, preventing the annoying sound...
Tropical Revised - Chapter One
"Senior year," said an anthropomorphic bat walking down a crowded high school hall way. "One last stretch, but this is going to be a long year." Walking along side with the bat was an otter with uniquely sky-blue fur, and he simply nodded in...
Mundane (Revision 3)[WIP]
_Pop. Pop. Crackle._ I laid by the glowing hearth, flames dancing in front of me. Sounds of water tap-tapped along the roof and windows as droplets collided with obstacles that impeded their flight from the heavens to the ground. I find it so easy to...
Tropical Revised - Chapter Ten
"Are you two all packed?" questioned the wolf, Nate sneaking up behind the otters in the crowded hallway. The final bell for the school day had just wrung, and with no school following next week because of Chymerage, the students were more than excited...
Tropical Revised - Chapter Nine
School continued normally for the next couple weeks, and as time passed, the newly formed couple grew more comfortable with their relationship while around their friends. Several times after a long day at school, the otters and their friends would find...
Tropical Revised - Chapter Eight
Soft chirping noises breached Rye's bedroom, carried upon the back of a chilled breeze, which rustled Rye out of his slumber and away from a very pleasant dream. Uncertain of which memories were a dream or real, Rye was slow to open his eyes and awake....
Tropical Revised - Chapter Seven
The otters weren't alone on the kilometer-long track; dozens of other students were stretched across the track, including their friends. When they started, they were all together but since the others have pulled far ahead of the two otters, who were...
Tropical Revised - Chapter Six
Two exhausted otters stumbled through Rye's welcoming door. Hours had passed since their departure from the Lagoon, and every second of those many long hours were filled with playing games, sports and video games with their friends, dancing and even...
My dad is dead (revised)
I don't know if I miss him or not. Did I really know him? What was I for him? Was I his redemption? Did I really care about him or was my relation to him just selfishness? I wonder if it is supposed to feel like in normal families. My dad was an...