The Tunnel
I look forward to comments and suggestions, as well as critique and any errors that you might spot that i missed in my personal editing. for those of you interested, this is my submission to the wordsmith awards challenge by naraki wolf.
The Warning
You can leave me comments, but most critique will be ignored. remember, i want this to feel unedited and rough, even if the author had some skill in writing. so don't feel bad if i don't listen to suggestions on how to make it work better.
Prison Cell (Thursday Prompt 23/8/12)
* * * comments, suggestions, and critiques are all welcome and appreciated. thanks for reading!
The Dragon and the Apple Trees
I am by no means a great story teller, so feel free to critique. (yes i know it's short) there was once a child, a young dragon, growing up in the world as it is today.
Everything Or Nothing cap 4 -Questions and Concerns
#5 of everything or nothing its done, phew , comments and critiques are veary welcomed ! :) "so what did you want to talk about, doc?" jorek said whit a raised eyebrow, his tone light and friendly.
Out in the country
Remember to comment and critique.
Red Snow
Any comments or critiques are welcome (interested in joining us? you can find it here: https://t.me/joinchat/cpoezhclggenroeh0yywvg ) i watched the sky in wonder. blue, yellows and reds mixing together on the soft edges of the clouds.
The First day at Work
Please enjoy and comment, rate and/or critique. i really enjoy writing this. as i open the doors to my job, i look behind me and shake my head trying to shake this imaginary friend that has begun to follow me from my mind.
Legal Limits 3: Happy Birthday Conan...
I wish i could talk to you and hear that sweet voice, wish we could watch movies or youtube and critique things as we go along, wish i could hear about your day...
The Family Curse Chapter 1: A Change of Perspective
Don't forget to vote, critique and fav this story if you like it. i am always open for suggestions. you may also request oc cameos, tie-ins or full roles in my stories. i will do my best to include them.
Just another furry love story
Id love to hear feedback or critique since this is my first time writing this type of story. i hope you enjoy this and ill be glad to keep writing this story. again, enjoy :) just another furry love story.
The fight of a Knight
Comments, critiques and the like would be appreciated since this is a style of writing (writing about battles and fights) that i'm not used to at all. ~~~ it happened in a flash, a large psi lash out that hit like the barrage of bullets on the