The Family Curse Chapter 1: A Change of Perspective
Don't forget to vote, critique and fav this story if you like it. i am always open for suggestions. you may also request oc cameos, tie-ins or full roles in my stories. i will do my best to include them.
Master's Pet - Prologue: The Storyteller Appears
Any and all critiques are welcome and desired the vast room slowly filled with furs of all ages, as it did muted, excited voices began filling the void in anticipation of what was to come.
The Tunnel
I look forward to comments and suggestions, as well as critique and any errors that you might spot that i missed in my personal editing. for those of you interested, this is my submission to the wordsmith awards challenge by naraki wolf.
The Warning
You can leave me comments, but most critique will be ignored. remember, i want this to feel unedited and rough, even if the author had some skill in writing. so don't feel bad if i don't listen to suggestions on how to make it work better.
Prison Cell (Thursday Prompt 23/8/12)
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The Dragon and the Apple Trees
I am by no means a great story teller, so feel free to critique. (yes i know it's short) there was once a child, a young dragon, growing up in the world as it is today.
Everything Or Nothing cap 4 -Questions and Concerns
#5 of everything or nothing its done, phew , comments and critiques are veary welcomed ! :) "so what did you want to talk about, doc?" jorek said whit a raised eyebrow, his tone light and friendly.
Out in the country
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Red Snow
Any comments or critiques are welcome (interested in joining us? you can find it here: https://t.me/joinchat/cpoezhclggenroeh0yywvg ) i watched the sky in wonder. blue, yellows and reds mixing together on the soft edges of the clouds.
The First day at Work
Please enjoy and comment, rate and/or critique. i really enjoy writing this. as i open the doors to my job, i look behind me and shake my head trying to shake this imaginary friend that has begun to follow me from my mind.
The Loner, Chapter 1
With that in mind, don't hold back with your critiques, if you're inclined to give them. i want to improve, and i can't do that if people are softballing their reviews. thanks, -tr 'stand, even if you only stand alone.'
Rat's Reputation: Redwall, new and improved
It sounds like i'm making lots of critiques, but this is my internal editor at work. these are nitpicks in an otherwise great story. i give the book my hearty recommendation.