Gildedtongue's Story, Chapter 1
After the final class gildedtongue took the recordings and the notes shi made and started to critique and grade each student. at 17:45 shi finally finished all the paperwork and left the school for the day, catching the bus home.
Cupcakes Re-done (Rough Draft)
She said she tried her hand (or, well, hoof) at sewing, and wanted rarity to critique her work. she happily agreed, and went to say goodbye to sweetie belle, her younger sister. "sweetie belle! sweetie belle! " rarity called.
CoB&G: Special Thanks Page
Luwyn werewusky: for sound advice, critique, spotting critical errors, collaborations and edit work. thanks to him, much of the series got the overhaul and improvements it desperately needed.
A woman's story - A Panda's tale
critique always welcome! chapter 1: a panda's integrity "he's a lazy little shit!"
Wolfsbane Excerpt #1
** _ _ **i posted this excerpt early to my patreon but decided to post it here purely for creative critique reviews.
The Five Warriors of Legend [Introduction]
.^ please provide critique if you have any as this will improve and make me a better writer in the long run. and don't be shy to give any ideas and suggestions because 9/10 chance that it would make it into my story (with reference of course).
Dog Cracking
So give him a +watch if you can cause he's a great person :d i would also like to thank ticklishfurry (or fa: ticklishfurry ), he's been a great friend and really supportive :) hope you enjoy and please comment all you want, i love constructive critique :
Blue skies, Red waters
Hope you like it and critique is welcome. )) once upon a time, on another planet, in another galaxy there was a race of people. they were known as the 'ru.
Distant Light ~ Prologue
critique is welcome ~ i'm not the most adept at space-age tech and such, and i'm certainly no physicist, but i hope it at least makes sense, where those parts are concerned... as i said, this is still being worked on, tweaked, edited, reviewed, etc...
Dog Cracking
So give him a +watch if you can cause he's a great person :d i would also like to thank ticklishfurry (or fa: ticklishfurry ), he's been a great friend and really supportive :) hope you enjoy and please comment all you want, i love constructive critique :
Against All Odds: Epilogue
I'd really like to thank each and everyone of you for taking the time to read my first ever novel-length story, for the comments, the critique, the compliments and the support.
Liam and Muireann
When he was finished, he critiqued the result. not only did it say exactly what it should, he thought it was his best yet. he bundled it up, and set off for where it needed to go. once in private with ciaran, liam explained himself.