Experiment 261 Chapter 1
When it is complete, i would like someone to give a good critical review of the entire story to see how i can improve on my writing skills.
Desert and Fayth ghosthunt
This is an attempt to improve writing skills and expand into other genres and experimental in design. desert mutt is copyright to myself. fayth is copyright to herself.) the night sky was mostly clear, the moon at the half-way point in its waxing.
Wolfen - Chapter 11
Just a warning, though, my writing skill has improved some since i first started writing. the air suddenly got much colder around verik.
Wolfen - Chapter 8
Just a warning, though, my writing skill has improved some since i first started writing. just before they reached the safety of the trees, there was a loud thump from something large landing in the grass behind them.
Wolfen - Chapter 10
Just a warning, though, my writing skill has improved some since i first started writing. that morning, verik had the same dream again, only slightly different. he still couldn't see anything, but there was something else.
Wolfen - Chapter 18
Just a warning, though, my writing skill has improved some since i first started writing. once they finished discussing their plans, myorakk, keil, verik, and nari headed back to camp to tell everyone else of what they came up with.
Inhuman | Chapter 17: Home Again [old edition]
Meanwhile, please note that the following may not be representative of my current writing skills and is kept here primarily for archival purposes. - chapter seventeen - _home again_ 'is everyone all right?'
Wolfen - Chapter 4
Just a warning, though, my writing skill has improved some since i first started writing. keil led the way into the clearing where the camp was set.
Wolfen - Chapter 14
Just a warning, though, my writing skill has improved some since i first started writing. verik looked into the wolfen's beautiful purple eyes. he opened his mouth to speak, but she pushed him away and got to her feet. "who are you?
Inhuman | Chapter 14: Sacrifice [old edition]
Meanwhile, please note that the following may not be representative of my current writing skills and is kept here primarily for archival purposes. **edit:** (08/28/10 10:45 am) - fixed a few little typos.
Inhuman | Chapter 01: Escape and Arrival [old edition]
Meanwhile, please note that the following may not be representative of my current writing skills and is kept here primarily for archival purposes. **update:** (05/10/10 2:35 pm) - updated to new edition (including formatting).
Changing Seasons: Fall 2010
Those two wrecked my writing skills so bad that this is the only thing i could came up with (and from all the other 5 drafts, this one wins by a roll of a dice. lucky thing...).