Writing Tips vol. 3
It is not an easy thing to do, and sometimes can be irritating when it is not done well. if it's a period piece, or fantasy, you will likely want very proper, formal speech.
Burdens - Chapter 18: Flight
He needed to wake the wolf up, but he felt if he did anything, blame would be placed upon him for things he had not done. he looked at the wolf who slept peacefully. he wondered how heavy a sleeper he was. he tentatively placed a paw on his chest.
"Daggers of Darkness, Book 3, On the Trail of Legends" - Epilogue
The heart was not done with them yet, for the ultimate test of heart lay ahead... (_author's note: the above picture of naoia -- in black and white -- goes here in book_) ...and naoia will be with them.
Final round: The championship part 1
My lp:3900 angel lp:4000 "i'm not done yet, attack my silver fang and tiger." they pounce at me and both attack's land. my lp:800 angel lp:4000 i hold my chest from the direct attack's, one eye closed looking at her.
Chapter One
Hey guys this is my first work on here and i have not done creative writing in two years (i've been doing argumentative and analysis essays for my ap classes) so i would really enjoy it if you guys would criticize me and don't be nice i need someone like simon
Hump day
Its already got over 10,000 words, but i'm not done yet. wednesday will be intense for everyone. some get what they want, some get what they deserve and some get laid. its an emotional rollercoaster of joy, anger, fear, loss, learning, and more.
Immortal, Chapter 5 - Prophecy
I'm not done with you...yet," katashi pushed himself up again. andreas narrowed his eyes and wondered how he was still breathing. katashi's body glowed and sayomi stepped back surprised.
Young Love
Also, i'm still not done, not till i make a white german shepherd hump a cheetah and it will be good. now, my characters so don't use themwalks out of frame the house was quiet when i got home.
CU: Sunset
Casey, a blue and white fox, turned his wife around to him and explained he had not done any damage to the house other than making a doorway into itself. "all he ever wanted was food." mrs.
Lion King : Chapter ll Family extended part 2
I'm not done. zian delivers one last combo. zian hits karo,karo moves just then zian hits karo with a bone shattering swipe.zian collapse. karo roars and falls. end of part 2 comment please
Burdens - Chapter 32: Withdrawn
He had yet to take a shower that day, but he had not done enough to start to smell too awful. all the same he still felt self-conscious about it, but the wolf denied smelling anything foul about it.
Soul Stalkers - 05
"we're not done!" tammy shouted and then immediately regretted it. "you forget yourself," her master said through narrowed eyes. "so have you," tammy managed to say with more control.