Eggceptional Get Away: Kickaha 2
Well, if it was science then obviously they could just redo it and get the same result! and if it was legal stuff...
Dive To Thrive And Survive
The marines and magicians arrive to the shore at the same time (which makes zack want to redo their alliance, yet chris definitely won't let that happen after what happened yesterday). "our gear. come on, dude."
Giving Love a Helping Hoof
Edit: alright, here it is ladies and gents, a redo of the seduction of harmony.
More than Kin, Less than Kind: Chapter Five
"i guess we could find an artisan to fix it up and redo the portraits." "hell no! i want this just the way it is. tarnish, dings, kiddie portraits and all." chara held the locket out toward asriel, dangling it on its chain.
"The Thin Line," Part LL
I had to undo the magick and redo it to give him assurances that he would not go through life looking like a variation on a fawn.
The white city
To continue as i want to start over again honestly in other words im open for criticism this is everything i had written so far in one large document instead of how i was origionally gunna break them all up just tell me your thaughts because how i wanna redo
The Wheel and The Lady Ch:1
The caretaker needed to redo some spells that wore off, jargon thought bitterly. he came to his apartment, marked not by a letter or number, but by a rune that glowed when he approached. it said, "to sleep."
Instincts of Justice Chapter 5: Struggle for Integrity
I could've gone more detailed and maybe i will come back and redo it later but i wanted to get it posted without many more distrations.
The Lost Digimon - 2013 version
I did a redo of my original story. digitalpotato was kind enough to give me some help and alter some things.
Lonely Oak Chapter 52
"redo," he said. "what a good sport," cassie said, taking the ball. "everyone okay?" "fine," replied ket and felicity. "can i serve?" emeral asked.
Juryokine: Exile of Heroes, Chapter Forty
Treyn had made him redo that one single thing over a hundred times before he was able to make the emotion look convincing. the play continued to progress, completely unaware of toke's silent plotting.
Gutpunch 4: Violence of an almost sexual nature
-mhm...the guy decided to redo the entire book after a couple of years, thinking he might do a better job at it. -and did he? - xurd asked, uninterested. -mmm...more or less. it was better than the first one. still.