Darkened Dawn: Part 1/3: Revolt To Revoria: Chapter 3: Kidnapping Kiddo
I'd love some details and feedback on how to make this better. thanks again for reading! "ergh, hey! let me out!" i was still in the bag, when i didn't know alice. "no," she said. "you'll come out when i let you out."
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The final stop is here
Thank you for reading my poem, pleas give some feedback to my poem.
My Secret to You... (sonnet)
Give me some feedback please? constructive critizism is good critizism.
Growing Up Gay In Highschool: Book 1: Freashmen
Thanks for reading and hope to get some feedback soon from everyone ^\_^;
How Cy Got His Name
Hey guys, i'm new to the whole scene here and this is going to be my first story ever so please give me feedback, and be honest! if i like writing as much as i think i will, and if i get good feedback i may make this into a series in my spare time.
Married!
Lots of changes to be made, based on everyone's feedback! now... on may 4th, 2015, aimee and i became married in daytona beach, florida!
Afterimage
Please provide feedback, as i hope to continue editing and making these acceptable for publication. yes, i remember vivid moments now, we talked and drank into the misty dawn, i even hear the voices as we ran by water's side on wettest summer lawn.
Across the Divide
Please provide feedback, as i hope to continue editing and making these acceptable for publication. above the valley of my distant plans, a barrier of gray from shifting storm.
The great escape ( well more like attempt) pt1
#1 of the great escape this is my first attempt at a story and i would appreciate your feedback and if i should carry on. **the present ** the noise was loud and sudden.
The Dead Can't Feel No Pain (poem)
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Rainfall - Chapter 03
And please, don't be afraid to leave me your feedback down below, i very much appreciate it! [[here]](https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1ascoypi_05gnwgrcrm77hdzxlx4z8kuw?usp=sharing) is my pdf repository, with all the latest versions.