What Tigers Dream Of - Chap. 1
So comments and constructive criticism would be greatly appreciated. ?
Duty Chapter 25: A Needed Calm
"i guess alex is one of them," he said, "...i mean...uh...i mean...you know...in critical condition..." jerry placed his hand on joji's shoulder, "go home, joji. we can take care of things around here."
A Night's Work
Since i'm always up for getting criticism, whether good or bad, i'm putting it up. oh, and i'm not really sure if this is clean or not, so if you guys think it should be marked as adult, i'll do that instead. anyways...
Another Kind of Empathy - Prologue
Don't forget that constructive criticism! (so nervous... sitting here for 5 minutes hovering over the button... okay, deep breaths. 3... 2... 1... save!)
Allies and Enemies
Her eyes blinked deliberately with a slight shake of the head, almost as if she had suddenly reached a critical decision.
Worlds Apart - Epilogue
Your compliance is critical to the future of the human race and your cooperation is absolutely essential to our survival. together we will end this threat.
An A-pear-ent Issue
However, it was in sven's nature to always over-analyze things, once even leading him to criticize a pack of off-brand gummy worms at the dollar store for shoddy packaging.
The Lead Crown: Ch 4b, Your Highness (Pt 1)
The majority of his traveling party was injured-- two critically so. regardless, they had a destination to reach. it wasn't a home to return to, per se, but it would hopefully be the salvation for cruff and the antelope man, tobias.
A Big Surprise
* * * criticism would be greatly appreciated, as long as it is constructive :).
Last one left: prologue
criticism and feedback will be appreciated so i can make improvements in the future and if you liked what you've read then don't hesitate to leave a watch and a fav! enjoy!!!!! i can still feel my sins howling over my shoulder.
Unfortunate Fortunes
The young man who's name is not yet being released is in critical condition but is respected to make a full recovery, if it where not for aden's bravery and will the young man would not be here today...."_
Green: Time's End (prologue)
Looking for criticism as usual. i'm not the type to care whether or not you hate fnaf or whatever. go ahead and tell me so and i'll write something else for you. and with that, here ends the prologue of "green: time's end"**