Mor'thal's Begining
#1 of for the future (old version) this is my first story ever. please let me know if there are any spelling/grammar issues. author's note fighter pilots often do not use a full sentence in combat.
am i alone?
This is my first story it true believe me or not my life is full with weird things i been down here for a long time i never get to see the out doors i only get to stay down here in the basement and read books if i need a new one i just knock on the door three
Prototype/ First story
#1 of beginning **this is my first story please be harsh in your critisiam. well here goes.** i close my eyes waiting for the blow to come. it's a perfect strike. the moment the fist colides into my jaw i am sent realing backwards.
Two Nuts And A Bolt
my first story uploaded here. yes, there will be yiff at some point in the story, but not quite yet. constructive criticism and suggestions are appreciated.
The Demon in the dark before the Angel in the light
Umm.. well this is my first story i hope you enjoy and please post comments let me know what i could do better and if you like it **prologue:** my name is blood dupree i am the mad hatter and i am a murder the grim reaper a demon and a true evil that walks
Ship wrecked chaper 1 salty tears
Well this is the begging if my series ship wreck please go easy with it this is my first story.
walk through the park
Heres my first story see if you cant pick out some of the people i watch ( ps to thoes in my story i made a bunch of stuff up so just go with it !) fav,vote comment or be gone! or you could read it. :p woo what a hot day!
balto's return
This is my first story on my new account give me ur thoughts in the comments on what u think will happen next or how balto will react next about how is old wife jenna has a new mate sorry for the bad spelling i will write a new story called rosexsteele tomorrow
kingdom hearts RT chr.1
#1 of my world this is my first story about kingdom hearts sunlight shine on my face \* huh \* i said as i yawned i open the window and saw the tower with the big clock ' will it sunset like always ' i said jumping out the bed putting on my cloths.
nohope part one
First story hope you enjoyed it this is my first story in a world far in the future the date is december 21, 2012 .i was sitting im my house preparing for the worst.as there had been repots of a large meteor(imagine the lincon memorial statue bout that large
Asharan: Jake and Ben
Well this is my first story of this genre and i haven't really written to many stories in my life so please comment and tell me what you think omg nervous also its short but i will continue it if everyone likes it.
Brisk's and Noah's Date
This is my first story, it was part of a trade with another user. any feedback would be much appreciated! it is a warm sunny evening, a posh restaurant being in clear sight in front of me.