Life is Just a Storm- Chapter 25- Absence
first drafts are meant to be shitty. first drafts are meant to be shitty. say it with me now. "first drafts are meant to be shitty." (oh my god, why am i not perfect??) here is chapter 25. more or less. 4,163 words. twenty-five.
Explaining Myself Part 1 - 'Other Things'
\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_ this is a first draft knocked up in about fifteen minutes so please go easy on me. feel free to let me know if i have made any critical errors, tell me what you think, blahdiblah etc.
Fluffybutt Prose Poem: Crumbs
#16 of fluffybutt prose poems not based off any actual furry, just a first draft of a poem for a horror fan who actually didn't care much for this one, at least not when applied to his own character. the boarders do not know where they are.
Don't Let Go
The first draft was much shorter and much, much more sympathetic toward the church. this one is less so, but the character still wanted very much to belong, and so i kept a lot of what is frankly christian buzzwords and propaganda.
The Emotion - Rough Draft
A first draft for the start of a short story and a test to get used to using this website. the night slowly crept over the dense rain forest, its dark but gentle grip blanketing the untamed land.
Bottom Dweller
#1 of forgotten drafts so this is an old first draft i did about a wanderer who lived on the surface of the earth if the future matched the jetsons.
Galactic Conflict - Chapter Ten
#74 of legacy of the veiled stars maybe i am rushing this now that i am revealing the answers to mysteries that have been throughout the entire story series but i am a bit eager to finish the first draft of this series so i can start editing it.
Stork Inc. [Archives]
By horatio husky trade with billy collie the following is the first draft in an attempt to write a story in an intentionally 'looney tunes' themed narrative.
Shadow of Everfree Forest - Chapter 1, Draft 1
. --- well, here's the first draft of chapter 1, from that mlp fan fiction i've been plotting out the past couple of weeks.
Preview of My First Story
Do remember that this is 'very early' 'first draft' style, so the quality may not be perfect, and there are some revisions i do want to make to it. but i'd like to hear feedback and see what you think of it, whether you like the characters (or not!)
Ghost of a Rose ~ Chapter 18
I’m a bit worried that that transition is a bit too sudden, but then again, this -is- only the first draft – and overall i’m satisfied with the markus at the end of the story compared to the markus in the beginning.
Unified Species of the Galaxy (Scrapped)
Now that i'm finished with the first draft of legacy of the veiled stars, i thought i'd try to explain a little bit more about my idea of my "furry" characters.