City of Light: Chapter 2
Thank you for my beta readers to go over this and help me. as you'll notice this was originally part of the first chapter of the first draft. i hope you enjoy the slight changes.
Omake 2: Breaking a Sweat
The characters in this story (except the oc-insert) are © chalodillo **omake 2: breaking a sweat** **beta-reader: ant0nius** vixy had a plan.
Watcher of Arceus
beta reader/co-author : catsithx full summary: the arceus bloodline is far from an ordinary line of humans. for generations, this bloodline has been keeping watch for the return of an ancient evil.
Pact Chapter 2: Bar Fight Part 3
Editor: jon sanders beta reader: razukai tapping on their shoulder, mortimer said. "it looks like both of you are in the wrong seats, drinking someone else's mead."
Watcher of Arceus chapter 8
Original author: the shadow master of weapons beta reader / co-author: catsithx xxx chapter 8 thomas stood still, looking at the bullet that had been caught inside the light green wall that radara had put up.
Totally Orignal Science Fiction Adventure: Chapter 1
Bear with me as i currently have no beta readers to make sure my errors are minimal, but i try.
A New Year
I don't want to get anyone's hopes up for what might or might not happen in part two of this little romantic thing i've got going, but i can tell you that so far my beta readers have been more than pleased with how i write this.
Jeremy 079; Future Concerns
Since you lot are basically beta readers i'm curious to know how many of you remember the few hints i gave along the way that just came to a head at the end there.
Jeremy 017; Karma's Toll
I always intend to reward patrons that essentially act as paying beta readers, so the continuation of predation will eventually happen. there was also some good questions asked that i briefly explained at the time.
Nathan's Story
I don't have a beta reader, so this is solo. closest thing i have to a beta is a friend who told me they liked the first chapter. please, give me any feedback you can. i want to improve this as much as i can.
Prologue & Foreword
Until then, you all will constitute my beta readers, if you'd like. and if you'd like to get your name into the special thanks section, i'd love if any of you could help brainstorm a few tags to upload this with.
Watcher of ArceusChapter 2
Original author: the shadow master of weapons beta reader / co-author: catsithx xxx chapter 2 thomas quickly left the pokemon center before anyone had the chance to question or thank him.