#20 of sara's story
a wrap up of what took place between sonata's story and this one, told from the slightly biased viewpoint of this story's main character.
Pokemon, Recap, Story Series, trapinch
Rociel's perspective of the world deviates from the typical viewpoints, where people see boundaries that shouldn't be crossed, she doesn't: rociel laughs at their feeble self-imposed restrictions, often throwing an extreme example that defies and defiles it
Adolescent, Athletic, Female, Humor, Hyaenidae, Hyena, Insanity, Sisters, Teen, Teenager, hero, psychopath
Very nicely done though, and giuliano enjoyed the quality of the animation, how the figure seemed to waver quite naturally and not stand perfectly still; just the right look of patience melting away into lack thereof, a head approaching the viewpoint - the
Bat, Clean, Feral, Fox, Magic, Male, No-Yiff, Shrinking, Transformation
She only stopped singing and skipping once, and that was to watch the little speck that was the ranger moving past her viewpoint of the horizon.
Cheetah, Elf, Moon, Space
Sometimes it's more subtle too, such as a statement of fact that should only come from the non-pov character's viewpoint.
for example: jim nodded, happy he had gotten his point across.
unless jim is the pov character, this is an omniscient statement.
Advice, Help, No-Yiff, tips, writing
The first few chapters will likely be alternating back and forth between the two until they finally meet, at which point i'll merge the viewpoints together. anyways enough spoilers, let's get on with the chapter! see you at the bottom of the page!
Anthro, Bedroom, Canine, Character Development, College, Male, Music, Shower, Story Progression, Wolf
"it depends on whose viewpoint you look at it from. i didn't think it was." he gave alex a quizzical look. "what's with the fascination all of a sudden?"
"nothing. i've always just wondered. you're not a bad kid at school now.
Clean, Fox, Highschool, Lion, M/M, Music, Wolf
I intentionally change viewpoints and separate certain sections with date, time, and location to give it that more mysterious feel, hopefully being successful at it.
Clean, Doberman, Introduction, Kissing, M/M, Mystery, Snow Leopard, Story Progression
This was, he realised at last, probably part of whatever effect caused his current viewpoint to be unattached to a body. finding oneself disembodied was slightly unsettling.
Fox, No-Yiff, Otter