Test Fight Scene - Criticism Needed

The cloaked figure vanished in a sudden burst of shadows, only to reform a few feet away again. the figure composed itself and quickly took its position again, tauntingly holding his weapon out to ento again.

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Seekers Tale Part 28

Once my mind is clear i focus on the shadow figure before me before speaking, "so you're the one who destroyed my home all those centuries ago." an evil laugh pours from the figure though it doesn't seem to move at all.

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Hail to the Whale who swears like a ****ing sailor.

Peter put his thumpback figure on the portal of power once more. the game didn't even respond at all. peter glared at the portal, removing the lit thumpback figure.

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Noise Prologue

He always dreams about that figure a lot, or sometimes they are different figures. the only deduction he could make at this point was that the figures weren't human.

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Steele's Fate - Prequel

Not caring _why_ the malamute didn't wake up, the dark figure was just glad that it happened. the figure finally reached the malamute. grinning, baring razor sharp teeth, the figure slowly moved his mouth closer to the malamute's neck.

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Chapter Three *The Watcher*

He watched one prisoner in particular, one in which interested him to a point where the figure watched only this lone sufferer. the dark, bodiless, faceless figure approached the interesting one and spoke for the first time in a long, long while.

Tales of the Stars Chapter 0: The begginning of the NWorld

Then suddenly, the door closed and the dark figure came into near the door and someone was right behind it. the dark figure said "this nothing but the beginning."

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Full Circle - Part 3

He saw a hooded figure getting out of a car across the street from him. the figure walked towards the house closest to the car. the porch light gave andy a good look at his face. andy suddenly froze; he recognized the figure.

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The voice of reason - Ch 25 - What the heart once owned...

_ the figure replied. _"cody...?"_ the figure placed his hands on my cheeks and kissed my forehead... _"you can't go where i am, nikki." "why not...? i'm here now..."_ the figure took my hands and placed it in his. _"no... not yet.

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Downhill Roll Chapter 3: Torture

The figure stood up, he was slightly taller than surrik. before surrik could react the figure swung around. "you little faggot!" the figure yelled, swinging around and punching surrik in the stomach.

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Into the Blue

The figures progress was noted only by the eyes of his master, those crimson orbs studying his every move.

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Scourge Second Life part 1

Suddenly a figure formed in front of him, a figure he knew; a figure he killed personally. "how nice to see you my old friend." the figure smiled and lifted his tail and a white orb floated on the tip. "do you know what this is?"

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