Torpedo Run Chapter 19
Chapter 19 Like shoals of piranhas swarming through an endless black sea, the two armadas swarmed toward one another at immense speeds made ponderous by the sheer emptiness of space. Captain Leith watched, heart thundering with the...
Torpedo Run Chapter 9
Hi everybody, sorry this chapter took longer to put out. For some reason it just didn't seem to want to flow. Anyway, please give me suggestions, comments, critique, whatever you feel might help me make better writing in the future. Thanks! ...
The Furry Dead (Medieval Style) Chapter II
When he'd fought the rot ogre, Tomasj's sword fighting had been powerful, fast, graceful in a brutal and terrible fashion, a symphony of murderous motion. Once they'd entered the undercroft tunnels and encountered the tightly-packed rotting dead,...
Torpedo Run Chapter 22
Comments and criticism are very much welcome :) Chapter 22 Olliver lowered his massive, invisible armored shoulder and plowed straight through his second building in less than ten minutes, grinning with angry satisfaction as he took out his...
The Furry Dead Chapter XIV - Pressure
Hey everyone - Let me know what you think! Is Captain Summer coming off as a grumpy badass, or is he too cliche? I'd love to hear what you all think about the character development and thematic elements of the story. Trying to figure out if I need to...
The Furry Dead (Medieval Style) Chapter IV
Comments welcome! ---------------------------------------------- The tower sat atop a squat hill, the round fortification standing as a foreboding sentinel over the deep-rutted, flooded crossroads whose legs vanished into the rain not a hundred...
The Furry Dead Chapter VII - The Path Decided
Hi everybody. For those of you still reading this series, how do you feel about it? Is it too slow, too much exposition? Or is it doing a good job of describing characters and setting the scene and themes of the setting? I'd love to get your feedback...
The Furry Dead Chapter XV - Kindling
Hi everyone, another plot development chapter. As requested, enjoy more awfulness ;) Please let me know if the corruption and zealotry seems believable. I've read way too much George R.R. Martin to let my political intrigue be boring, so please help...
The Furry Dead Chapter XXI - The Dying Time
Chapter XXI - The Dying Time Van pitched himself into a roll as one of the speedy clawed undead leapt at him, and came up on its other side with an arrow already nocked, pulled, and ready to release. He planted the shaft into its head to the...
The Furry Dead Chapter IX - Foreshadowing and Forests
Hi y'all. Tried a bit of foreshadowing in this chapter. Not really sure it came out right. Comments welcome. Chapter IX - Foreshadowing and Flight Ranks of armored guards stood, guts fluttering but faces stoic, flanking from two sides the...
The Furry Dead Chapter VI - The Forest Warden
Chapter VI Getting to and shimmying across the rain-slicked tree limb had taken the warden nearly an hour, more thanks to the howling wind that tried to fling him from the tree repeatedly and need to avoid detection through the window he was...
The Furry Dead Chapter XX - The Battle of Amarthane
Chapter XX - The Battle of Amarthane Swirling snow had the City Wardens huddling on the rooftops of Amarthane, wrapped up in their cloaks and trying to stay warm as much as keeping watch. The thick fall would make long-range visibility near...