Kyyanno's Journey - Chapter 8
Morning arose over the village, and the residents soon became aware of what had happened during the night. The village defence team had gone out and found three more rats, all of which claimed just to be bandits, stalking the tavern. The...
pieces first draft 7/24/12
Pieces Pieces of my heart, Pieces of my soul, Gift of my heart, Smashed to pieces, Picking up what's left, A soul is only as big as a heart to hold it, Pieces of my soul falling away, Heart broken again and again, till the pieces are to small to find,...
Section 1: The Chakat Who Folded Hirself (First Draft)
#2 of works in progress this is my first draft for section 1 of the new version of the chakat who folded hirself. this section is pg, maybe even g, but the whole story is planned to have a max rating of pg13.
The First of Many...
Now, mind you--i had first drafted the experiment with the spirited young otter when he was still a military physician some years ago._ _while the machine was far from ready to be tested formally (after all, i only knew of cadaver testing), i instructed him
Nightly Prowl: Part.1, Finding a Prey
(credit goes to lunar creations for helping with making this sotry better from the first draft)
Editing
I used to post first drafts but then i discovered i was losing readers because they did not want to reread my material.
i am wyrm (first draft, 10/15/11)
My blood is balefire, My heads are many, My flesh is poison, My mind is hate, My heart is oblivion, My soul is corruption, I am the destruction of all, The end of times, The crash of the heavens, The death of the world, I am apocalypse incarnate, I am...
Ander - Part 6: Subchapter 129
* * * this used to play out slightly differently in the first draft. originally, ander and nilia didn't go to the basecamp first. they came here first, and this created a very annoying problem for me.
Fears of a Newbie Writer
The fwg liked the first draft, hopefully you'll like the "polished" one. enjoy and have a nice day. **fears of a newbie writer** i'm scared of trying to be a writer. i'm scared cause i don't always believe in myself.
Update
#4 of first draft the massachusetts time traveler this is only my first draft to get all my idea's out in writing so it's probably gonna be crappy as it's only three chapter's
Writing Advice: What Makes You Write?
There are, before you get any words down on the page, lots of pressures that can make achieving your writing goals difficult, things beyond figuring out the plot of your story, how to make a character sound write, or edit that tricky first draft up to the
[Draft] Star Wars: Right vs Easy - Deleated Scenes
#9 of sample/teaser stories the first draft of sw: right vs easy written by kajex surnahm [the full completed story can be seen here https://www.sofurry.com/view/1506640 ] this was the first draft that i received from kajex with my first commission and there