Shadow of Everfree Forest - Chapter 1, Draft 1
. --- well, here's the first draft of chapter 1, from that mlp fan fiction i've been plotting out the past couple of weeks.
Unified Species of the Galaxy (Scrapped)
Now that i'm finished with the first draft of legacy of the veiled stars, i thought i'd try to explain a little bit more about my idea of my "furry" characters.
Future Plans
This escalated the war quickly and soon the first draft cards were sent out. it was a sunny august day and henry was coming home with his father after a hard day's work. it should have been a normal day, just like any other.
Preview of My First Story
Do remember that this is 'very early' 'first draft' style, so the quality may not be perfect, and there are some revisions i do want to make to it. but i'd like to hear feedback and see what you think of it, whether you like the characters (or not!)
Dons Nation 4 - Week 5
Last season, the head coach of the team, jack knight, drafted his sister jacqueline knight for the first draft pick. then he gave quarterback roy dejesus the boot after the first week when he threw for five interceptions.
Explaining Myself Part 1 - 'Other Things'
\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_ this is a first draft knocked up in about fifteen minutes so please go easy on me. feel free to let me know if i have made any critical errors, tell me what you think, blahdiblah etc.
Ander - Part 6: Subchapter 129
* * * this used to play out slightly differently in the first draft. originally, ander and nilia didn't go to the basecamp first. they came here first, and this created a very annoying problem for me.
Rescue
(this is a first draft, btw. i still need to edit out the errors and such. i'll post a new version when that happens.) she awoke to screaming. at first she was scared that she was dreaming. then she was scared because she knew it was not.
Stork Inc. [Archives]
By horatio husky trade with billy collie the following is the first draft in an attempt to write a story in an intentionally 'looney tunes' themed narrative.
Writing Advice: What Makes You Write?
There are, before you get any words down on the page, lots of pressures that can make achieving your writing goals difficult, things beyond figuring out the plot of your story, how to make a character sound write, or edit that tricky first draft up to the
Lenny Gets a Job: As a Maid in a Mansion
It's another rough first draft (as is the theme here in "forgotten drafts"). i had planned to do a series about lenny sow, a hopeless manchild who tries and tries to get a job and fails and fails spectacularly at every one.
Don't Let Go
The first draft was much shorter and much, much more sympathetic toward the church. this one is less so, but the character still wanted very much to belong, and so i kept a lot of what is frankly christian buzzwords and propaganda.