Contact - Part 2
And any advice and critique are welcome! i am doing this as a way to tell my stories to the world. and to get better at writing my stories at the same time. on a side note, i have already finished writing part 3 and am in the process of writing part 4.
Fuzzy Feelings Chapter 2 : Knowing From the Heart
Her ears were perked up, as if she was waiting for me to give her my critique.
The Lead Crown: Ch 8.3a, Rude Awakenings
The floor is now open for questions, comments, and critiques! tranquil waters: the lead crown ch 8.3, rude awakenings gift-of-the-earth was thrown into his brother as the entire structure jumped.
Gnoll Brigand: The Adventure (Prologue I)
Suggestions, critique, and voting go into the comments section. also, the next entry's formatting won't be as sloppy. **prologue i: background** you are a gnoll (that's fantasy-speak for "hyena monster").
Cobalt Amps Up - Commission for MeisterLi!
As always, comments and critiques are welcomed! i might lay off commissions for a bit, but i'm sure i'll open them again, since this one was such fun!
The Lead Crown: Ch 8.3c, The Great Illusion
The floor is now open for questions, comments, and critiques!
Empress of the Dark
.** **if you have any questions, suggestions, praise, hate, love, critique feel free and welcomed to leave them in the comments.** **until next time, see ya'!**
Splintered Light, Chapter 2.1: The Black Beacon
This post is now open to questions, considerations, critiques, quandaries, complaints, comments, and all those other wonderful things! splintered light chapter 2.1: the black beacon there were a number of reasons why dr.
All's Fair - Part 18
As always, i love getting comments and critique, so don't worry about being hard on the story. if you don't like it, please take the time to tell my why :). nick's bi, so read at your own risk. i hope you all enjoy.
Canvas and Melody - Chapter 3
#5 of canvas and melody all comments and critiques welcome, and any questions will be answered in character and henceforth canon.
Chapter 62: A Tomboyish Sister... Oh Boy...
She critiqued. "again i'm sorry. it's just that she is my love at second sight. and apparently, she showed me as well." he answered with a smile. "she is a good girl once you get to know her and her family, or her clan."
Furry Little Secret ch. 3
#3 of furry little secret ch.3 of fls, adult, just for safety, please give me your constructive comments and critiques komamura went straight for his bedroom when he arrived home.