Inner Dilemma | Part 5

#5 of inner dilemma before you read this part, i want to inform you that i changed the writing style from third person to first person (allen). i got that suggestion and now i'm following it and i like it.

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Reunion: Prologue

It is also written in third person vs. my usual first person. enjoy! prologue prime minister frederick wallace sat at his martian oak desk, going over a new set of 'issues' that required his attention.

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The Pain of Losing - Chapter three

Side note i like to say who hates it should leave his comments for himself please, anyone who got tips for me to improve my writing is quiet welcome and any mistakes in this chapter tell me guys. another thing i'm still a rookie in third person writing just

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this terrible war part 3

(from here telling from a third person narative view) nate had a few ideas...but in his head something just sparked...he was gay...and well gay people werent aloud in the army...maybe if he acted gay or something atleast that he would get a discharge

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History Note - The Holy Order of The Inquisition

Current lord inquisitor, third person in history to hold that title, is our noble prince, lord inquisitor kevran of house heartfell.

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Red Moon: Revolution Chapter 9

Trevor got that dmitri, rommel and a third person, sergei, would tell him everything if he asked, but he didn't want to know any details so he didn't. dmitri had asked trevor to stay in russia with him.

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I Caught God: Ch6 In Which My V Card is Threatened

(oh look a brief third person scene) as they slip into a secluded side cavern, mewtwo glances back over his shoulder. "are you sure it is a good idea to just leave him with the girls like that?" "are you kidding? he'll be fine."

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The Intention

Brad grinned, as the raccoon was literally the third person out of a lecture hall that held hundreds. he stood. "hi!" jonathon waved as he came closer, smiling. "hey there."

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Glass Hearts

"i'm trying to explain-" he began, but was cut off by a third person clearing their throat. "is something wrong?" the familiar voice said. jason and henry both turned to see kenny standing tall with a grocery bag in his right hand.

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David's Start of a New Adventure (Ch.24 - Some Secrets Revealed)

Lucario continued, still unaware of the third person. "i was so mad at myself, because i did that to someone so innocent. i started punching a pillow on the sofa. in the middle of that i realized i started crying.

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Prologue

Sorry, not trying to talk about you in the third person." i nod in affirmation, "it's all good." then i recognize what they are talking about almost instantly, "that... yeah. one of my prouder moments, for sure.

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Vivat Draco

(for grammar fans, "vivat" is the third person singular active present subjunctive of the verb "v?vere", "to live".) the acclamation "vivat rex" or "vivat regina" frequently are used in coronation ceremonies and anthems used in such ceremonies.

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