In essence, the e-mail contained various pictures of taking the various bodies of animals and putting them into this machine which somehow restored conciousness to the animal in the form of a cake body formed exactly like the animal's origional.
Philosophy, Reincarnation, cake, celebrities
Like, for example, i origionally wrote the story in third person, then changed it to first person, but forgot to change some of the third person terms (such as he, they, she, etc) to first person (i, we, you). then... i changed it back to third person.
Action, Adventure, Character Development, Clean, Leaving Home, Love, Military, Story Series, War, World War II, dad, girlfriend, mom
Fuckin best i doubt hes on here though
im looking for feedback on this im unsure of how to continue as i want to start over again honestly
in other words im open for criticism
this is everything i had written so far in one large document instead of how i was origionally
Blood, Cat, Character Development, City, Death, Drama, Fantasy, Gay Relationships, Hate, Mammal, Multiple Species, Murder, No-Yiff, Science Fiction, Speciesism, Squirrel, Wolf
After all, the mouse did incapacitate a rat with a single strike. . . and carried him in what she origionally thought to be his demise: it was a good start, and certainly much more than he would have seen possible in any other mouse.
Eagle-owl, Mouse, Owl, Philosophy, Power, Prey, discussion, predator
Based on the what lichthia said of this owl. . . his discretion matched up well with his origional thoughts of owls. . . and far surpassed them in terror on the same realm of logic. but tabatha. . . 'polite'. . . 'sweet', it just. . . didn't seem scary.
Fear, Mouse, Near death experience, Predation, Predator/Prey, Rat, Snake, anxiety, hope, python, talking
origionally he thought lichthia found the doe unconscience. he noticeed how she held her leg, maybe she passed out shortly after speaking to lichthia?
Aneira, Fear, Lichthia, Mice, Mouse, Prey, Rat, Snake, development, discussion, predator, python