Chapter Nine
Walls and reach the mic, there would be no feedback.
JUXTAPOSITION Chapter 1 - Sounds of Silence
Extra thanks to solipsisticnarcissistic for support and continues feedback! (ps. this takes place during bolt's journey, after his self-realization and before he reaches hollywood.)
Project X (pt 6)
It looks like we don't have much time left" he told feedback shaking him awake. feedback rolled over and woke blinking in the bright light and taking in the glory of a new day.
Alex & Brendan - Introducing the Brothers
Please give me some feedback, and be sure to look for brendan in thenovelist's exploration's series sometime soon, hopefully! thanks again everybody!!! ~dowski
That's what I need, A human to rescue me.....
Please leave feedback and even give suggestions of where you think the story should lead ^\_\_^ !
Poll/ Channel Update
Just wanting some feedback as to the work i'm doing. hey everyone! wanted to see what kind of content you guys would like to see coming, also just give a little update as to what's in the works right now.
Poem: Wolf Love
I'd love as much feedback as possible. and the name is who the poem is about, i abreviated to keep his anenimity. **wolf love** - bdm you are my wolf you're respectful you're loyal you're protective you are my alpha.
"Wolf Boy" a Fantasy Novel
I sincerely hope with continued work and feedback that i can shape this into being a published work that can be enjoyed by many.
The reason I live.
Please give me some pointers i love feedback. sorry if you find this to be utter garbage, i personally do a bit, but like i said wanted a second opinion. another day, just put on a smile. make a joke to keep up appearances.
Fathom's Phantoms, Ch 20.5: Cognition
Aps were given the rules and guidelines, each with varying levels of weight in determining positive and negative feedback and the programs ultimate goal was to maximize the positive feedback while limiting the negative.
A few random updates!
In addition to this i plan to do a full edit of all my work so far, so if you see it's been updated be sure to take a second look and give me your feedback again.
Reflections
The feedback on salazzle dazzle has been stellar thus far, and... honestly, it's restored a lot of my faith in my own writing.