Neo-Revolution
Well this is my first shot at putting anything on SoFurry, even though I've kinda been on here for years. Feed back is MUCH appreciated! I hope to keep adding onto this story and turn it into a series, of shorter story like, chapter things, which when read all together will tell a story about the rise of Abnormals in a society which finds them freaks of Nature and tries to abolish them. Each short story/ chapter like thing will take place from a different perspective but shouldn't harm the continuity of the story. So, here goes nothing! ------------------------------ Part One View Point: Ethan Title: Puddle of Blood ------------------------------- I don't remember much of my early childhood, certainly not Joshua being born. But my earliest memory is of my father, Stanton, as we called him, he didn't much like "Dad" , showing Josh how to catch a baseball. That's when Stanton told me that some people in the world aren't very Normal, or even anywhere near close. I hadn't really believed him until third grade, I was nine and the year was 2000. I had been in fights before, but along came Hoyt Grant, a fifth grader, he had a problem with me beating his friend Austin Wesson into a bloody pulp a week earlier. Hoyt started the fight by attacking a friend of mine, Michael. Hoyt slung a nasty right hook that the unknowing Michael took to the face, the force of the punch was enough to break Michael's nose. Michael crumpled to the ground desperately trying to hold back the flood of bright red blood that was flowing free and forming a puddle of blood upon the ground. At that moment He'll had no fury like me. I felt my blood start to boil and an extreme heat emanating from my body. When all was said and done I was about a foot taller, had a snout, fangs,and fur along with about a hundred people who where either fleeing or staring in amazement at the Werewolf who had just appeared in front of them. I looked around and saw Joshua, my younger half brother, about five feet behind me. Josh being eight almost nine, was amazed that his brother was a werewolf. While Michael, still holding his bloodied face looked at me like it was no surprise whatsoever. - Alright that's the end of my first segment. Please comment on things that could be fixed, or if you have any suggestions about what should happen later in the story. If I get mostly positive feedback I will post the next segment on Memorial Day, May 30th 2012. If the feedback is mostly negative, well I guess this will be the last Segment that I put up. Thanks for reading I appreciate all of you who comment and to the silent readers, I thank you guys and gals for reading too and I encourage you too step outta the shadows and comment. Submitted on May the 23rd, 2012 by Mew2vsmew