Strait from the Sales Block
Any comments and critisism are appreciated and i appollogise in advance for spelling errors and grammer. 'take your pick! any sex, any age! we have it all! if i'm lying my hat is ten feet tall!
The Gate-Way: Chapter 1 – A Bond Strengthened
Any and all constructive critisism, comments and suggestions are greatly appreciated. i hope you all enjoy reading what i have put together.
Over in that Meadow ( chapter 1, New Friends and Lion Eyes)
( please read and tell me what you think, i love constructive critisism!) fire surrounded them as griffin cried over the wounded body of her friend, ash. oh ash, so kind, so wonderful, the only person who ever befriended griffin.
Runaway Hostel Chapter 1
I won't mind some constructive critisism :3_ _anyways, i delay_ _you long enough. enjoy!
An Act of Kindness
He shouted well, hope you enjoyed it ^^ .......and i'd really like feedback from my readers, tell me what you thought =3 .........all forms of critisism will be taken into consideration xd .......thanks
A Chance Glance
Any and all helpful comments and critisism is appreciated and would be considered quite helpful.
Pathfinder: Intro
So please post critisisms and comments in the comment section or something. i want to know what you guys think of it s'yeah. be brutally honest. any way... here. .__. nara woke in the abandoned, lean-to shed.
Guard dog!
Please ffeel free to leave feedback, critisism is always wellcome too the morning after passed like any other... boring classes, hard classes, then lame classes, followed by harder classes.
Mysterious visit
Bulbasaur didn't take too kindly to the critisism of his trainer however, as he released a small stun spore in scav's direction paralyzing the poor dragon. "ack...i was just trying to help..."
The shaman of the sun
I want to be critisiced, not sure how that is written, on everything. of course if you see problems with grammar forgive me, i don't talk english all the time, you know living in mexico and everything.
The Gate-Way: Chapter 13 – A Proposition Made
As always all comments, constructive critisism and suggestions are welcome and greatly appreciated. i hope you enjoy this chapter.
the clash of the immortals
This is just a rough draft, any and all constructive critisism will be greatly appreciated. i know that this is probably a giant steaming pile of crap compared to the other writers on sofurry, but it's my first giant steaming pile of