An Act of Kindness
He shouted well, hope you enjoyed it ^^ .......and i'd really like feedback from my readers, tell me what you thought =3 .........all forms of critisism will be taken into consideration xd .......thanks
Mysterious visit
Bulbasaur didn't take too kindly to the critisism of his trainer however, as he released a small stun spore in scav's direction paralyzing the poor dragon. "ack...i was just trying to help..."
All You Need is Love: Chapter 1
critisism is therefore appreciated so long as it's constructive.) david walked out of the large building shaking uncontrollably.
Chronicals of the Black Guard: Chapter 3
Never once critisizing or complaining that he should have done this or that. what suprised him most was, as he finished, he felt her arms slide around his shoulders, hugging him softly from behind.
The Uncorrupted
Looking primarily for constructive critisism to improve my writing skills :) and yes, i use the word "it" a lot in refering to the undead creature.
The Gate-Way: Chapter 1 – A Bond Strengthened
Any and all constructive critisism, comments and suggestions are greatly appreciated. i hope you all enjoy reading what i have put together.