Pathfinder: Intro
So i'm pretty new here and this is my first post. I'm not exactly sure how to go about doing this so, here, the intro to mah story which I will be posting
chapters tot the site whenever I can. ALSO, I might not still be calling the story "Pathfinder" So just look for stuff from Narranoxa. So please post critisisms
and comments in the comment section or something. I want to know what you guys think of it s'yeah. Be brutally honest. Any way... here. .__.
Nara woke in the abandoned, lean-to shed. The front wall had fallen down and there were cracks and missing planks in the remaining three, leaving the interior as frosty and cold as the outside. A light snow was falling in the morning air. Nara picked himself up from the damp ground and brushed the snow off his brown leather vest and shirt. He stretched his wings and took a swig from his heated canteen. He picked up his rucksack that he was using as a pillow and stepped out into the foggy, snow-covered forest. Nara wiped the sleep out of his eyes and attempted to light a fire in the pit he had made the night before. To his disappointment, the firewood was too damp to ignite. He remembered stacking more firewood in the corner of the shed and, hoping that they weren't wet either, went to retrieve them.
As he picked up the cold, yet relatively dry wood, he heard a soft 'crack' coming from the forest. There was no wind strong enough now to break a branch.
Nara's head swarmed with thoughts of what or who the noise could've come from. He decided that he did not want to risk it thinking that it was just a small tree creature and took out his cherrywood handled blade from a holster on his belt. He peered through a hole in the back wall to see what had broken that branch but the fog was too thick for him to see very far. He turned around so he faced the missing wall and crept around the corner with his blade at the ready. He did a full th360 degree turn but saw nothing tion the dense fog.
Another branch broke just behind him and he turned so fast he nearly got whiplash.
"Nara, relax. It's just me" Sev said with a stack of firewood in her arms. Nara put the knife
back in it's holster. She put the wood down and muttered a word that Nara could only imagine was 'Jackass.'