You know, like social commentary. everybody's knows that these days, if you want to be raunchy and serious on the internet, you need to also be relentlessly preachy."
"too bad we never had a point," icicle said. "hey! know what you should do?
Female, Hyena, Male, Wolf Dog, Wolfess, knife, psychopath
I'll also state outright that while i imagined cthulhu as the beast in the fog, i couldn't help but throw in my own commentary. the entire poem is a subtle stab at the cult of marxist/leftist ideology that seems to be in vogue.
Assimilation, Dark, Death, Demon, Depressing, Evil, Fear, Magic, Mind Control, Monster, Pain, Poem, Poetry, Political, Supernatural, cthulhu, surreal
The soldier panted softly as he leaned against the sandbag barricade that was established long before the fighting became this bad. He was slumped over it, as if he had been killed in action. Luckily, that wasn't the case, but he had been close to...
Commentary, Male, Military, Outdoors, Short Story, Solo, Standing Up, Third Person, Uniform, War, Warrior, Weapon
War of the Spirits is monster battle game with some card battle features.
It was discovered in the world of Neos, it was believed that in ancient times, that the Lord of Spirits and the God of Man, consulted to allow the creatures called Spirits to...
Alchemy, Commentary, Fantasy, Magic, Sci-Fi, Science, Science Fiction, Series, Story Series, Talk, Various Species
While each chapter is certainly read by pretty descent numbers, there's a definite lack of commentary on the series and it has led me to feeling things aren't interesting enough for readers to find things/moments worth commenting on after they've read.
Pokemon
~ as she let the snacks and drinks cascade onto the counter, the brown bear made sure to square up her shoulders while she pretended to not notice the cashier's grip on the tire iron while providing commentary to the coyote's glances
Bear, Coyote, Murder Averted, Owl, travel
If you have any commentary or critic, please go ahead and put it in the comments. anything said can only help. for now though, enjoy this short prologue to a long story.
City, Elderly, Male, ancient
The Walk from Darkness to Light:
A Brief History of the Canius People
Compiled by,
Rhys ap Tewdwr,
Lead Archivist of The Sapphire Empire.
The history of my people has been subjected to many interpretations, assumptions, and wild flights of fancy....
Commentary, Coyote, Dragon, First Person, Fox, Half-Wolf, Hybrid, Incomplete, Jackal, Mammal, Reference, Series, Short, Tutorial, Wolf
It's a little late and I'm very sorry about that puppy... But Happy Birthday Conan. The funny things is, I'm not really a 100% sure how old you really are... Not that it matters at this point. I wish I had been able to send you your birthday present...
Commentary, Compassion, Controversial, Gay, Gay Relationships, M/M, M/M/M, Male/Male, Passion, Real Life, Short
Who reflected my blessed monstrosity back at me_
_but while i've still inherited humanities spite_
_on the rafters he'll stay and rat-tat-tat-tat_
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nothing infuriates butters more then savage commentary
Poetry, Raven, prose, song
Jast and tyler came in and watched, with some commentary from tyler. me and jast had the same idea and ice beamed the servine's mouth shut. he looked at us with a look that practically screamed, "what did i do?!"
Hybrid, Top gear, Training, Umbreon