Mizalin-on-Sky: Boulder Trouble
From behind, jarzyl could hear caden providing a running commentary to glecion, describing the situation since the blind fledgling couldn't see what was going on. "...standing on the boulder fully.
Cyanide of Riddance chapter 15.
You know, like social commentary. everybody's knows that these days, if you want to be raunchy and serious on the internet, you need to also be relentlessly preachy." "too bad we never had a point," icicle said. "hey! know what you should do?
Cthulhu's Grasp
I'll also state outright that while i imagined cthulhu as the beast in the fog, i couldn't help but throw in my own commentary. the entire poem is a subtle stab at the cult of marxist/leftist ideology that seems to be in vogue.
War of Spirits: Manual.
War of the Spirits is monster battle game with some card battle features. It was discovered in the world of Neos, it was believed that in ancient times, that the Lord of Spirits and the God of Man, consulted to allow the creatures called Spirits to...
Defense of Home
The soldier panted softly as he leaned against the sandbag barricade that was established long before the fighting became this bad. He was slumped over it, as if he had been killed in action. Luckily, that wasn't the case, but he had been close to...
Might Be Retiring From TOTGM For A While
While each chapter is certainly read by pretty descent numbers, there's a definite lack of commentary on the series and it has led me to feeling things aren't interesting enough for readers to find things/moments worth commenting on after they've read.
Paper, Plastic, or Tire Iron. (Otherwise Untitled)
~ as she let the snacks and drinks cascade onto the counter, the brown bear made sure to square up her shoulders while she pretended to not notice the cashier's grip on the tire iron while providing commentary to the coyote's glances
Legend of the Gladiator: Prologue
If you have any commentary or critic, please go ahead and put it in the comments. anything said can only help. for now though, enjoy this short prologue to a long story.
Legal Limits 3: Happy Birthday Conan...
It's a little late and I'm very sorry about that puppy... But Happy Birthday Conan. The funny things is, I'm not really a 100% sure how old you really are... Not that it matters at this point. I wish I had been able to send you your birthday present...
The Walk from Darkness to Light: Part 1
The Walk from Darkness to Light: A Brief History of the Canius People Compiled by, Rhys ap Tewdwr, Lead Archivist of The Sapphire Empire. The history of my people has been subjected to many interpretations, assumptions, and wild flights of fancy....
Regarding Carrion Diets
This slice-of-slice tale provides a little commentary of how a society of anthropomorphic critters might view the eating habits of scavengers. particularly crows. enjoy!
Faux Fossil
"yes, it's providing quite biting commentary on our conversation." he looked back and forth between the two badgers. "no? nothing? well, i thought it was funny...."