Leviathan 01: Name of the Game
For one, it's written in present tense. i think it'll help capture a certain immediacy i'm going for, so hopefully it works out.
For Love of Love 9: A New Begenning
The use of present tense bothered her, sharply reminding her again that she was no longer in the service of her order. "this must all be old stuff to you." "not really," she answered.
What I Know
present tense, he corrected, nodding. you didn't have to travel great distances to 'go places.' to see things. to live. so, though not as sleek and bright, maybe, as a current station would be, it didn't really matter.
Rendezvous, Part Two
"you're speaking about this in the present tense for a reason." "forty millennia after it vanished, it reappeared. the pictor hired an alliance of unaligned criminal syndicates to track it down.