Writing Tips vol. 4
You want your dialogue to flow and sound natural, but not be too chopped and overly realistic. however, it is okay to chop speech in the form of accents and such. it can lend your character that unique voice that will set them apart.
The Big Sister Part Fourteen: Sister Vs Sister
#3 of the big sister stoy i kind of shortened this chapter to focus on the fighting as realistically fight scenes would be faster and end more quickly than narrative ones. also, if you spot the jojo reference you get a cookie!
JakeFox 2
Most realistic costume ever. easy first prize. where was that, austin texas somewhere? but i was missing something. i had hands, feet, a human face. and no tail!
What Is Your Name?
**Backstory** **"What Is Your Name?"** Unlike many others, he never remembered himself as a hatchling or a baby. The earliest flashback he could recall was a vision of a sandy beach. He peered through the vision flashing in the darkness, coaxing a...
The Unintended Curse Ch17
I hope to get a bit deeper into the storyline and to that make it a bit more realistic.
Chapter 4 - Roleplay and Rainbows
In truth, rarity was wrestling with some very realistic doubts. her view, ever since she was a young foal, was that her prince charming would be there to sweep her off her hooves.
Found and Lost
Fennec, usually the more practical and realistic of the pair, found himself siezed with the urge to sign aboard one of those wonderful ships and see the exotic and distant ports of call to which it would arrive.
2. Finding Winter
A set of big cat outfits with pelts so realistic he expects them to pounce at him with a softer, fluffy, bunny costume seemingly hiding from its predators. a hard-shelled insect is next, with a sectioned body suit that is also lined with hard carapace.
File #11
If it was a cover up, then it was the most realistic one he had ever encountered in his life. he had learnt not to take face situations at face value during his time on the warrior.
Prudentia Elaine: Roots [Ch. One]
The scientists saw how much i liked to be "outside", and when it was my 8th birthday, they added a few birds, frogs, and insects to the courtyard to make it seem more realistic.
The Lion of the Underdark
His mane shrank slightly, his snarl turned into a look of confusion, and his muscles decreased slightly to somewhat more realistic proportions.
Paws of Snow Chapter 4
It was a dead deer prop that felt so realistic and broke apart, and everything that there was no distinguishing it from the real thing until you went to eat it.