Space Story Tech level
Genetic engineering: this field of technology has improved a great deal from simply curing genetic diseases. in the early years of colonization in the inner systems humanity had issues adapting to harsher environments.
The Cohen Loop, Ch 2
With hunter's very commanding direction gary, despite always looking tired, really improved in classes.
Foreword
Comments and advice is greatly appreciated, as i am new to writing, and would very much like to improve. so please, by all means, tell me what i can do to improve.
Against All Odds: Part 13 - Generation Gap
Out of spite, he felt tempted to mention that nathan had computerised them, improved upon the paper version maxim insisted be used.
To Chase a Rabbit: Tragic Ending
_ with a small fire ignited in his soul, he begins to draft a plan for city improvement to submit to his boss, who sent him on this short trip to the so called "bad part of town."
Do You Want To Find Out How I Got My Nickname: "Orion the Protector?"
Any and all comments are welcome, let me know what i can do to improve. the sea is as unforgiving as she is bountiful.
Return
"you improved on my move." sunset walked over and extended a hand to him. she smiled. "maybe it would be a good time for that massage i promised you." lacyus sat up without taking her hand. he shook his head. "wow. i'm actually dizzy."
Only a Shadow - Chapter One
So if i make a few mistakes, i'd like to see some critique so i can improved.
New World, New Life Ch 1
#1 of new world, new life this is my first story so if you know of ways for me to improve lit me know please. oh the carters are my own & if that are like some other it's buy freak accident.
Chapter 2: The Basic Badge
"tensa, you're already super fast and super strong, why would you think that you could improve more?" he had excellent speed as well as excellent strength. "look. you're going to train me, understand?"
Jeremy 023; Experimental Indulgence
That too was far from comfortable but it was a slight improvement to the hard floor. it was effecting his sleep. perhaps it had been from experimenting with patomes but jeremy woke in the middle of the night from a dream.
Simba and Nala's secret [3]
#3 of the lion king lion king 1: chapter 3:simba and nala's secret made some structural improvements and spelling corrections etc.