Continued Exchange, Part 3
#3 of continued exchange when writing the original "exchange", i tried to keep it in simba and bambi's perspectives. i knew i wouldn't have been able to do that here otherwise some things would come out of no where.
Hypnovember 6 - Pendulum
The world didn't look half bad from this perspective. across the lake, he saw the trees swing back and forth with the rhythm of the hammock. the lake itself shifted and swayed. a giggle escaped his lips as his head nestled into the crook of calus' arm.
Vocabulary
It's difficult to really tell what these creatures look like due to them being so massive, but to put it into perspective, i'll use a description i've written several times through my stories: a counterweight at it's normal size cannot fit inside of a universe
The Brawl
So this isn't confusing: each paragraph is from an alternating perspective, and the last one is from a third. there it was. we walked up to the building front in the pouring rain, preparing ourselves for what we knew what was inside.
Niko's Revelation Part 1
He figured that she would be questioning her perspective on love. he knew he had sprung something on her she found appalling. "it's not a bad thing to fall in love with me...at least i don't think so. i wanna know something...do you love me back?"
Enfield transformation
I don't often write in second-person perspective, so i hope this still works alright. this was slammed out in less than half an hour when my muse said "keyboard nao" and i just let it wander my hands across the thing.
Existence
From my perspective, the world was merely as small as can be. nothing but a huge ball of dirt and water. and incapable people, nonetheless.
The Pathways of Life - Prologue
This is the pathways of life, a series in the perspective of shane from the road of life series as well as a few stories from some of the other less worked with characters.
Dry Eyes, Cold Hearts (Ch. 3)
He watched scenes and happenings from a mercurial 1st person perspective as landscapes kaleidoscoped into each other with little regard to sanity, and the noise!
The Tunnel
Being able to write anything for some time, i decided to really delve into my subconscious and allow the part of my imagination that creates the most horrible things, and i came up with this, and i could not resist writing it in the first person-limited perspective
2:15 A Full Circle
But look at it from our perspective, that plot of land is what you all have in common." the otter said nothing to this, but simply walked over to his bottle of open brandy, and poured himself another glass. "god... it's hard to enjoy this anymore..."
As you know Bob, show don't tell: Srsly (7 shows, no tells!)
The novel has gradually evolved to various new and different perspectives, many of which make having a narrator in the classical old style look rather odd.